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D for Defiant
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posted November 28, 2008 10:12 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for D for Defiant     Edit/Delete Message
Mother and father
Brother and sister
Torn asunder

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Heart--Shaped Cross
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posted November 29, 2008 08:16 AM           Edit/Delete Message
loneliness, estrangement,

little tugs on the soul to stir compassion

and everything,


well written.

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D for Defiant
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posted November 29, 2008 10:51 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for D for Defiant     Edit/Delete Message
Thanks, HSC

This one is just a mix of my fragmented ideas...and I didn't strive for refinement when I wrote it.

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MyVirgoMask
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posted November 30, 2008 02:18 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for MyVirgoMask     Edit/Delete Message
I love fragmented ideas and thoughts - they make the best poetry

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D for Defiant
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posted December 23, 2008 10:45 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for D for Defiant     Edit/Delete Message
Thank you for your encouragement, MyVirgoMask, I really appreciated. I'm flattered.

It's a pity I no longer devote as much time to poetry as I used to...

Happy holidays!

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Charlotte
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posted December 28, 2008 07:00 PM           Edit/Delete Message

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D for Defiant
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posted December 28, 2008 10:40 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for D for Defiant     Edit/Delete Message
Thank you, Charlotte.

I just corrected my careless grammatical mistakes in the poem

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