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Topic: Asunder
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D for Defiant Knowflake Posts: 588 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 28, 2008 10:12 PM
Mother and father Brother and sister Torn asunderD IP: Logged |
Heart--Shaped Cross unregistered
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posted November 29, 2008 08:16 AM
loneliness, estrangement,little tugs on the soul to stir compassion and everything, well written.
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D for Defiant Knowflake Posts: 588 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 29, 2008 10:51 PM
Thanks, HSC This one is just a mix of my fragmented ideas...and I didn't strive for refinement when I wrote it. D IP: Logged |
MyVirgoMask Knowflake Posts: 1002 From: Bay Area, CA Registered: May 2009
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posted November 30, 2008 02:18 AM
I love fragmented ideas and thoughts - they make the best poetry IP: Logged |
D for Defiant Knowflake Posts: 588 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted December 23, 2008 10:45 PM
Thank you for your encouragement, MyVirgoMask, I really appreciated. I'm flattered.It's a pity I no longer devote as much time to poetry as I used to... Happy holidays! D xxxxxxxxx IP: Logged |
Charlotte unregistered
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posted December 28, 2008 07:00 PM
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D for Defiant Knowflake Posts: 588 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted December 28, 2008 10:40 PM
Thank you, Charlotte.I just corrected my careless grammatical mistakes in the poem D IP: Logged |