Posts: 16
From:
Registered: Nov 2008

posted December 29, 2008 04:20 AM         

---

crying heart out, i am not
darling if you see

yes i know how we longed
to be wrapped in a tight hug
as if no one else existed

dreaming day and night, i am not
darling if you see

yes i know how we imagined
to be together once and forever
like no one can come in between

but yes it is life
and dreams do shatter
darling i know
we cant live a dream

crying heart out, i am not
darling if you see

------------------
If you understand, things are just as they are; if you do not understand, things are just as they are...

IP: Logged

Posts: 9352
From: 11/6/78 11:38am Boston, MA
Registered: Aug 2004

posted December 29, 2008 06:19 AM         

---

This poem is disarmingly simple and beautiful.
Love your signature quote, too.

IP: Logged

Posts: 15211
From: *
Registered: Jun 2004

posted December 29, 2008 08:34 AM         

---

Beautiful expression.

Dreams do shatter.
And we do awaken.

IP: Logged

Posts: 1615
From:
Registered: May 2006

posted December 29, 2008 09:15 PM         

---

Rhythm,

Welcome!

The beauty of this poem is found in its simplicity. I really like it. HSC said it all. Your signature quote is a good one, too.

D

IP: Logged

Posts: 4747
From:
Registered: Dec 2005

posted December 29, 2008 10:13 PM         

---

I feel like this was written just for me.

I loved your signature too... perfect. But most of all, I loved your name.

IP: Logged

Posts: 3025
From: ohio
Registered: Aug 2004

posted December 30, 2008 12:02 AM         

---

Refreshing! I can't wait to see more.

IP: Logged

Posts: 346
From:
Registered: Nov 2006

posted December 30, 2008 09:16 AM         

---

This is Lovely...

IP: Logged

Posts: 9352
From: 11/6/78 11:38am Boston, MA
Registered: Aug 2004

posted December 30, 2008 03:16 PM         

---

But where is the author, to take her bow?

IP: Logged

Posts: 15211
From: *
Registered: Jun 2004

posted December 30, 2008 05:03 PM         

---

Maybe Rhythm's a him; a he.

Where beith you Rhythm? And are you a he, a she, a shem?

IP: Logged