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Topic: For the Love of Sinners and Saints
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GypseeWind Knowflake Posts: 166 From: Dayton,Ohio USA Registered: May 2009
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posted May 12, 2009 11:39 AM
I walk this world with my Beloved Wingless Angels troubled Beasts with burdens twisted and tortured by their own pastsI`ve cannonized these creatures and always I fall prey to their charms in summer days of jasmine; I am transfixed by their tales I am lulled by bedroom eyes and whiskey voices In fall; I dream in poetic cacoons blooms transcending...like the blessed the feverish body below my soul As the nights grow colder I notice the more horrifying absurdities of my life I know I fight for redemption and yet I am cursed by the Moon to sin. ~gypsee~
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T Knowflake Posts: 408 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted May 12, 2009 01:20 PM
Youre good. Welcome! IP: Logged |
GypseeWind Knowflake Posts: 166 From: Dayton,Ohio USA Registered: May 2009
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posted May 15, 2009 11:11 AM
Thank You so much T.IP: Logged |
cpn_edgar_winner Knowflake Posts: 326 From: Toledo, OH Registered: Apr 2009
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posted May 20, 2009 01:28 PM
i really like this.very good. IP: Logged |
GypseeWind Knowflake Posts: 166 From: Dayton,Ohio USA Registered: May 2009
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posted May 28, 2009 11:14 AM
Thank you for reading. Cpn!IP: Logged |
Valus Knowflake Posts: 354 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted May 29, 2009 04:11 AM
I hear you. I didn't want to say anything else; just, "I hear you", -- you know? For dramatic effect and all that.
In italics, right? With the alien up there, peeking out of the corner... But I also have to say you are brilliant. And your light burns so as to rekindle the dying hearts; those slow sparks, almost suffocating under the heavy ashes of ancestry, sophistry, and industry. Or something less pretentious, and equal to the artistry of your poem. Thank you so much for sharing your mind and your light with us. IP: Logged |
GypseeWind Knowflake Posts: 166 From: Dayton,Ohio USA Registered: May 2009
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posted May 29, 2009 01:22 PM
Valus!That is the nicest thing anyone has said to me in a very long time. I'm overwhelmed. Thank You for making my day. IP: Logged |