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GypseeWind
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Posts: 166
From: Dayton,Ohio USA
Registered: May 2009

posted May 12, 2009 11:39 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for GypseeWind     Edit/Delete Message
I walk this world
with my Beloved Wingless Angels
troubled Beasts with burdens
twisted and tortured by their own pasts

I`ve cannonized these creatures
and always I fall prey to their charms
in summer days of jasmine;
I am transfixed by their tales
I am lulled by bedroom eyes
and whiskey voices
In fall;
I dream in poetic cacoons blooms
transcending...like the blessed
the feverish body below my soul

As the nights grow colder
I notice the more horrifying absurdities
of my life
I know I fight for redemption and yet
I am cursed by the Moon to sin.


~gypsee~

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T
Knowflake

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posted May 12, 2009 01:20 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for T     Edit/Delete Message
Youre good. Welcome!

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GypseeWind
Knowflake

Posts: 166
From: Dayton,Ohio USA
Registered: May 2009

posted May 15, 2009 11:11 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for GypseeWind     Edit/Delete Message
Thank You so much T.

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cpn_edgar_winner
Knowflake

Posts: 326
From: Toledo, OH
Registered: Apr 2009

posted May 20, 2009 01:28 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for cpn_edgar_winner     Edit/Delete Message
i really like this.

very good.

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GypseeWind
Knowflake

Posts: 166
From: Dayton,Ohio USA
Registered: May 2009

posted May 28, 2009 11:14 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for GypseeWind     Edit/Delete Message
Thank you for reading. Cpn!

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Valus
Knowflake

Posts: 354
From:
Registered: Apr 2009

posted May 29, 2009 04:11 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Valus     Edit/Delete Message

I hear you.


I didn't want to say anything else;
just, "I hear you", -- you know?
For dramatic effect and all that.

In italics, right?
With the alien up there,
peeking out of the corner...

But I also have to say you are brilliant.

And your light burns so as to rekindle
the dying hearts; those slow sparks,
almost suffocating under the heavy ashes
of ancestry, sophistry, and industry.

Or something less pretentious,
and equal to the artistry of your poem.
Thank you so much for sharing your
mind and your light with us.

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GypseeWind
Knowflake

Posts: 166
From: Dayton,Ohio USA
Registered: May 2009

posted May 29, 2009 01:22 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for GypseeWind     Edit/Delete Message
Valus!

That is the nicest thing anyone has said to me in a very long time. I'm overwhelmed. Thank You for making my day.

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