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Topic: almost over you
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cpn_edgar_winner
Knowflake Posts: 835
From: Toledo, OH
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 21, 2009 03:22 PM
 
been waiting all night
for you to come home
it's almost daylight
and i 'm all alonei strum my guitar
shadows my light
i fumble through songs
someday i'll write i wonder who your with
i'm almost over you i gather my things
there by the door
a note on the table
I can't live here anymore i wonder who your with
i'm almost over you clouding my head
memories of sunny days
crowding my mind
all of our yesterdays it wont be long
i'll find somebody new
someone who really loves me
like you used to do i wonder who your with
i'm almost over you clouding my head
memories of sunny days
crowding my mind
all of our yesterdays
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Valus
Knowflake Posts: 825
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Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 21, 2009 03:42 PM
Your words are beautiful.You're a true poet. 
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cpn_edgar_winner
Knowflake Posts: 835
From: Toledo, OH
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 21, 2009 03:54 PM
OMG! NO HE DIDN"T !!!!!never ever in all my years has he commented on my poetry! this is a special day indeed! rock on with your bad self!!!
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cpn_edgar_winner
Knowflake Posts: 835
From: Toledo, OH
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 21, 2009 04:14 PM
actually i wrote this song thinking about my friend jen.i never shared it with her, as she is more than gracious and even when going through terrible things, stays positive and loving and knows good will come to her. (and it will) but that is me feeling her pain and loving her...without her even knowing i feel it. IP: Logged |
Valus
Knowflake Posts: 825
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posted July 21, 2009 04:18 PM
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GypseeWind
Knowflake Posts: 862
From: Dayton,Ohio USA
Registered: May 2009
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posted July 21, 2009 05:10 PM
Very nice, CPN.
It reminds me of Pearl Jam's 'Better Man.'
Don't know if your familiar with that song, but it just popped up big time in my head when I read your words.IP: Logged |
Quinnie
Knowflake Posts: 125
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posted July 21, 2009 06:14 PM
Oh thats so cool CPN. It sounds like some classic lyrics.
Yeah Pearl Jam or Led Zep (I'm an obsessed fan)...IP: Logged |
T
Knowflake Posts: 765
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posted July 27, 2009 08:39 AM
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