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SunChild
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posted August 01, 2009 08:34 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for SunChild     Edit/Delete Message
I've just been in a place of peace this afternoon, and wrote this ~ without thought , just wanted to see what was going to come out.


Man's heart creates the song of Eden
the mind is fractured,
captured
by the taste of ones
own idea
of perfection

work as One whole
respecting the tendrils of uniqueness
shaping the way
for the hearts journey

blessed be the one
who listens to the music
without thought
to feel and not think
gives the heart a voice


Maybe I'll get better at it as I age. lol

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Valus
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posted August 01, 2009 10:17 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Valus     Edit/Delete Message

I love it.
It's so beautiful.

But my heartsong tells me,
and I want to believe,
that there is no antagonism
between heart and mind.
Both have their place,
and cooperation is key.
Or am I thinking too much?

I really liked your poem.


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listenstotrees
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posted August 01, 2009 05:19 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for listenstotrees     Edit/Delete Message

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posted August 01, 2009 07:10 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for T     Edit/Delete Message
Beautiful poem SunChild. I understand.

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SunChild
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posted August 02, 2009 01:54 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for SunChild     Edit/Delete Message
Edited.. I did not know where I was going with this... I should not complicate my thoughts.

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listenstotrees
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posted August 05, 2009 10:51 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for listenstotrees     Edit/Delete Message
I read your thoughts before you edited them and I think you had some good ones there.

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SunChild
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posted August 06, 2009 12:54 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for SunChild     Edit/Delete Message
Awww

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Broken
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posted August 08, 2009 09:34 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Broken     Edit/Delete Message
What a beautiful poem. Just wanted to let you know you are a strong talent.

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