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Topic: just birthed a poem.. it's been a while
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SunChild Moderator Posts: 322 From: Melbourne. Victoria. Australia Registered: Apr 2009
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posted August 01, 2009 08:34 AM
I've just been in a place of peace this afternoon, and wrote this ~ without thought , just wanted to see what was going to come out. Man's heart creates the song of Eden the mind is fractured, captured by the taste of ones own idea of perfection
work as One whole respecting the tendrils of uniqueness shaping the way for the hearts journey blessed be the one who listens to the music without thought to feel and not think gives the heart a voice Maybe I'll get better at it as I age. lol
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Valus Knowflake Posts: 912 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted August 01, 2009 10:17 AM
I love it. It's so beautiful.But my heartsong tells me, and I want to believe, that there is no antagonism between heart and mind. Both have their place, and cooperation is key. Or am I thinking too much? I really liked your poem.
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listenstotrees Knowflake Posts: 387 From: Stonehenge Registered: Apr 2009
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posted August 01, 2009 05:19 PM
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T Knowflake Posts: 876 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted August 01, 2009 07:10 PM
Beautiful poem SunChild. I understand.IP: Logged |
SunChild Moderator Posts: 322 From: Melbourne. Victoria. Australia Registered: Apr 2009
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posted August 02, 2009 01:54 AM
Edited.. I did not know where I was going with this... I should not complicate my thoughts. IP: Logged |
listenstotrees Knowflake Posts: 387 From: Stonehenge Registered: Apr 2009
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posted August 05, 2009 10:51 AM
I read your thoughts before you edited them and I think you had some good ones there. IP: Logged |
SunChild Moderator Posts: 322 From: Melbourne. Victoria. Australia Registered: Apr 2009
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posted August 06, 2009 12:54 AM
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Broken Knowflake Posts: 5 From: Registered: May 2009
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posted August 08, 2009 09:34 AM
What a beautiful poem. Just wanted to let you know you are a strong talent.IP: Logged |