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listenstotrees
Knowflake

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From: the 5th dimension
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posted February 15, 2010 09:09 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for listenstotrees     Edit/Delete Message
Disconnected, madness
Self-centered, consumerism,
Scruffy, cold busy streets
Grey skies and concrete
Loud, disruptive noises
The shouting, the pushing
I turn and walk back
Along a side path
Where it is quieter
The trees that line it,
Somehow, give off
An energy
Replenishing inner harmony

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listenstotrees
Knowflake

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From: the 5th dimension
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posted February 15, 2010 09:40 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for listenstotrees     Edit/Delete Message
You have possessed me,
my love
with desire that haunts
me, day and night;
a pleasant intrusion
of improper thoughts.
This world, such a
crazy world
surrounds us;
I watch it spin around
but you and I
know where we may find
our nirvana.
Those thoughts, intrude
such sweet intrusion.
How I long for you,
it haunts me day and night
Every cell on my skin
aches for your touch
every part of my body
obsesses for our union
I need to feel you.....
Longing for you, in every way
and on every level
I've waited this life-time to find you,
it feels like longer.
I feel we were lovers before
ancient souls, who shared a love
a love more
powerful than death
a love, unforgotten by the heart
as we entered new lives,
forgetting the old,
buried somewhere
in non-physical memory.
Still our love
burns deep within.
I long for your touch.
I long for our union.
I need you to be inside me;
I need to fall with you
into you
to ride the wave of your climax
and rest in your soul,
where there is oneness.
I long for your body,
I desire it like no other
to hold you tight
your skin against mine
to rest in, be held in
your arms.
Forever.

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Yin
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posted February 16, 2010 09:06 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Yin     Edit/Delete Message

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listenstotrees
Knowflake

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posted February 16, 2010 10:54 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for listenstotrees     Edit/Delete Message
I don't really know if my 'poetry' is any good. I gave up trying to make it rhyme or scan a while ago. I don't plan what I'm going to write or how when I start to write it. I'm proud of a few things I've written but I'm really not sure about the rest......

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Yin
Knowflake

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posted February 16, 2010 11:19 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Yin     Edit/Delete Message
LTT, you called this one "Rambles". I took it as a narrative more so than a poem. It displays extreme sensitivity that I relate to. There is something magical about you - like you live in-between worlds. I really like that.

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listenstotrees
Knowflake

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posted February 16, 2010 11:59 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for listenstotrees     Edit/Delete Message
So sweet of you, I will take that as a great compliment, thanks.

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GypseeWind
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posted February 16, 2010 11:00 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for GypseeWind     Edit/Delete Message
It's beautiful and ethereal, just like you are, LTT. I know exactly what Yin means.

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mermaid26
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posted February 16, 2010 11:58 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mermaid26     Edit/Delete Message
They are absolutely right. I have no formal training but I think this may be called prose, when it just flows out. It's an evident outpouring from your beautiful soul. I knew immediately upon the initial reading of one of your posts that your were gifted with deep insights. This makes you a true beauty.

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listenstotrees
Knowflake

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posted February 17, 2010 08:56 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for listenstotrees     Edit/Delete Message
Why, thank you

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listenstotrees
Knowflake

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posted February 23, 2010 02:40 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for listenstotrees     Edit/Delete Message
Are we born out of dust....
Does all form stem from thought
Do we create our experience
Through the perception
We filter it through?
Consciousness, oh mind
It's a wild rollercoaster ride
I'm afraid;
But maybe I have the reigns
To wherever I may steer....
Are we born out of dust
Does all form manifest from air
Where be energy's original origin?
I'm afraid
Let me loose my fear
I want to lean back, and rest
To find a sanctuary
To dream a dream
To merge into
An endless oceanic song.

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