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Topic: Rambles
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listenstotrees Knowflake Posts: 815 From: the 5th dimension Registered: Apr 2009
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posted February 15, 2010 09:09 AM
Disconnected, madness Self-centered, consumerism, Scruffy, cold busy streets Grey skies and concrete Loud, disruptive noises The shouting, the pushing I turn and walk back Along a side path Where it is quieter The trees that line it, Somehow, give off An energy Replenishing inner harmony
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listenstotrees Knowflake Posts: 815 From: the 5th dimension Registered: Apr 2009
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posted February 15, 2010 09:40 AM
You have possessed me, my love with desire that haunts me, day and night; a pleasant intrusion of improper thoughts. This world, such a crazy world surrounds us; I watch it spin around but you and I know where we may find our nirvana. Those thoughts, intrude such sweet intrusion. How I long for you, it haunts me day and night Every cell on my skin aches for your touch every part of my body obsesses for our union I need to feel you..... Longing for you, in every way and on every level I've waited this life-time to find you, it feels like longer. I feel we were lovers before ancient souls, who shared a love a love more powerful than death a love, unforgotten by the heart as we entered new lives, forgetting the old, buried somewhere in non-physical memory. Still our love burns deep within. I long for your touch. I long for our union. I need you to be inside me; I need to fall with you into you to ride the wave of your climax and rest in your soul, where there is oneness. I long for your body, I desire it like no other to hold you tight your skin against mine to rest in, be held in your arms. Forever.IP: Logged |
Yin Knowflake Posts: 1158 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted February 16, 2010 09:06 AM
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listenstotrees Knowflake Posts: 815 From: the 5th dimension Registered: Apr 2009
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posted February 16, 2010 10:54 AM
I don't really know if my 'poetry' is any good. I gave up trying to make it rhyme or scan a while ago. I don't plan what I'm going to write or how when I start to write it. I'm proud of a few things I've written but I'm really not sure about the rest...... IP: Logged |
Yin Knowflake Posts: 1158 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted February 16, 2010 11:19 AM
LTT, you called this one "Rambles". I took it as a narrative more so than a poem. It displays extreme sensitivity that I relate to. There is something magical about you - like you live in-between worlds. I really like that. IP: Logged |
listenstotrees Knowflake Posts: 815 From: the 5th dimension Registered: Apr 2009
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posted February 16, 2010 11:59 AM
So sweet of you, I will take that as a great compliment, thanks. IP: Logged |
GypseeWind Moderator Posts: 2717 From: Dayton,Ohio USA Registered: May 2009
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posted February 16, 2010 11:00 PM
It's beautiful and ethereal, just like you are, LTT. I know exactly what Yin means.IP: Logged |
mermaid26 Knowflake Posts: 83 From: just visiting you know Registered: Jun 2009
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posted February 16, 2010 11:58 PM
They are absolutely right. I have no formal training but I think this may be called prose, when it just flows out. It's an evident outpouring from your beautiful soul. I knew immediately upon the initial reading of one of your posts that your were gifted with deep insights. This makes you a true beauty.IP: Logged |
listenstotrees Knowflake Posts: 815 From: the 5th dimension Registered: Apr 2009
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posted February 17, 2010 08:56 AM
Why, thank you IP: Logged |
listenstotrees Knowflake Posts: 815 From: the 5th dimension Registered: Apr 2009
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posted February 23, 2010 02:40 PM
Are we born out of dust.... Does all form stem from thought Do we create our experience Through the perception We filter it through? Consciousness, oh mind It's a wild rollercoaster ride I'm afraid; But maybe I have the reigns To wherever I may steer.... Are we born out of dust Does all form manifest from air Where be energy's original origin? I'm afraid Let me loose my fear I want to lean back, and rest To find a sanctuary To dream a dream To merge into An endless oceanic song.IP: Logged |