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posted July 22, 2010 09:05 PM         

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Rising Violet

Rising Violet
reaches for distant stars.
Not one known to shrink,
she travels to Mars
… and paints her clouds pink.

and...

Rising Violet,
her smiles are pure joy.
She greets each new morn,
true love to her boy,
… a rose without thorn.

and...

Rising Violet
heals with love's magic.
Keeper of sacred cup
she turns the tragic
… to triumph, straight side up.

and...

Rising Violet
she's everyone's friend.
Some will despise her for this
that she doesn't easily offend.
… Open hearts will share in her bliss.

~ Mermaid26

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posted July 22, 2010 09:25 PM         

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Lovely.

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posted July 23, 2010 12:05 AM         

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Thank you Teasel!

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posted July 23, 2010 08:51 AM         

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looks like lyrics to me.
i could write music to that.
cool merm.

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posted July 23, 2010 05:11 PM         

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Beautiful rhythm, mermaid

Your unique rhyming scheme makes me think a little of our Linda...

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posted July 23, 2010 06:35 PM         

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Thanks Cpn - I hope to explore any latent musical talent that I may have someday. My mom can play the guitar and dulcimer and sings beautifully. I gotta have my music.

Thanks VAA- I guess I write freely in that whatever comes out, come out. My goal is make the practice of writing more habitual.

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posted July 23, 2010 11:35 PM         

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Beautiful.

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posted July 24, 2010 12:13 AM         

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Thank you Valus!

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