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From: Royal Oak, MI USA
Registered: Jun 2009

posted August 11, 2010 09:09 PM         

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Feeling and foundering
I'm so done with this wait
On the brink of something worthy
And all I am is late

Show me what I've longed for
Bring me tangible success
I need a way out of this gloom
My head's a dragging mess

Tired of the the numbness
where I sink to self-protect
Leaning on a fragile limb of hope
Help me learn to resurrect

Plumbing depths I've tried to leave
I seek release from chains of doubt
Self-imposed and smothering
Wounds raw from repeating this route

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posted August 19, 2010 11:46 PM         

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"Feeling and foundering
I'm so done with this wait
On the brink of something worthy
And all I am is late"

That is AWESOME.

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From: Royal Oak, MI USA
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posted August 20, 2010 10:40 AM         

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Thanks, Mystic Melody! I appreciate the feedback

It's been a rough last few months, chocked full of lessons and repetition...

I'm feeling drawn to do something different in my life and since my horoscope this week hinted at reclaiming parts of me I'd lost before making any future decisions, I'm wondering if publishing the poetry falls into this category...I've wanted to do that for as long as I can remember...

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posted August 22, 2010 05:50 AM         

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posted August 22, 2010 05:19 PM         

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Share your poetry every way you can. ♥

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