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Virgo-AriesArtist
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From: Michigan :)
Registered: Jun 2009

posted November 25, 2010 12:55 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Reconfigure all I knew,
painting pink over skies of grayish-blue
Bring new light to the decrepit gloom,
Implode old hauntings, let them not consume


Paternal love has been there all along,
cared best from a distance,
yet deep-flowing and strong.

Mother who slayed all my dragons with heart,
she is warm and affectionate,
Connected right from the start.


Along my way I thank the boys I've loved,
They gave me each such special gifts,
They taught me to feel deeper,
in gripping clarity,
then set me on my way, adrift.


I find a nurturance all it's own,
in the love I have right now.
We bring a mutual grounding light,
in each other's eyes,
inspiration without ensnaring flight.

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Randall
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From: Columbus, GA USA
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posted November 25, 2010 10:23 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Vividly beautiful.

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"The earth is not given to us by our mothers and our fathers, it is borrowed from our children."

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saronna
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From: Australia
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posted November 26, 2010 07:59 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for saronna     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
publish this in your new book

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Virgo-AriesArtist
Knowflake

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From: Michigan :)
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posted November 26, 2010 11:34 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thanks for the feedback, my lovely Knowflakes

What makes you mention me publishing a book, saronna? Just curious...

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Randall
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posted December 18, 2010 10:44 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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"Everything I eat has been proved by some doctor or other to be a deadly poison, and everything I don't eat has been proved to be indispensable for life. But I go marching on."--George Bernard Shaw

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Randall
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posted January 07, 2011 07:30 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
*bump*

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"Don't worry about the world coming to an end today. It's already tomorrow in Australia." Charles Schultz

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