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Topic: Song Lyrics: "No Pretense"
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Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 156 From: Michigan :) Registered: Jun 2009
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posted December 06, 2010 11:15 PM
I just composed this one today, and I wish there was some way to show the rhythm I picked for it (I'm a percussionist, not a melody person), ah well...here goes:All I can ever do is speak my heart, All I can ever do is find a way, All I can ever do is speak directly, knowing deep down, it's all for good. All I can offer now is truth so clear, Words so sincere they light the way, All I am giving are best intentions, All I can do right now is share my heart-felt song... IP: Logged |
MysticMelody Moderator Posts: 1066 From: Registered: Apr 2009
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posted December 07, 2010 12:38 PM
Verrry pretty. My mind started singing at "truth so clear, Words so sincere"it flowed with melody
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Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 156 From: Michigan :) Registered: Jun 2009
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posted December 07, 2010 11:24 PM
Thanks, MysticMelody! I'm so glad the Universe provided music for you while reading these lyrics It's the first song I've written in years, and it just came flowing out as I was staring into the bathroom mirror... LOL, I just rhymed, without even trying!! I'm amusing myself IP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 156 From: Michigan :) Registered: Jun 2009
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posted December 07, 2010 11:50 PM
Here's the current version of lyrics:All I can ever do is speak my heart, All I can ever do is find a way, All I can ever do is speak directly, knowing deep down, it's all for good. These years we've lost sitting here in the dark we can let go, move on, find a spark,,, So man take the time, just hear me out, what loss can you take, cause nothing will break, when you realize... All I can ever do is speak my heart, All I can ever do is find a way, All I can ever do is speak directly, knowing deep down, it's all for good. All I can offer now is truth so clear, Words so sincere they light the way, All I am giving are best intentions, All I can do right now is share my heart-felt song... IP: Logged |
SunChild Moderator Posts: 1520 From: Melbourne. Victoria. Australia Registered: Apr 2009
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posted December 08, 2010 07:28 AM
I really just believed I heard it in my Mind! Well done! ------------------ “It’s an interesting thing. Seeing Kuan Yin relating to a flower so intently. She's not just looking at it; she's interacting with it…I’m seeing how the act of relating to a flower appears to be so simple. Yet, it takes a tremendous amount of courage to make such a “simple” act important. Now, the lotus is floating away.” IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 4229 From: Columbus, GA USA Registered: Apr 2009
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posted January 06, 2011 11:47 AM
------------------ "Don't worry about the world coming to an end today. It's already tomorrow in Australia." Charles Schultz IP: Logged | |