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Virgo-AriesArtist
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posted February 21, 2011 10:29 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
In the midst of falling
I reach my ground
And it's such a place to be
A lovely cradling cavern
where I find just what I need

It takes just but a minute
where I flip the mental page
A time to seek sense
such sparkling truth,
and it chases out the rage

I claim this earth
as a refuge sent
with faith yet unbetrayed
the darkness holds no power here
for with Him, I am unafraid

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Ami Anne
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posted February 21, 2011 10:39 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ami Anne     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
((((Virgo Aries Artist))))

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Jesus never put his trust in man cuz he knew what was in man.
He who controls his Spirit is greater than he who controls a city
Proverbs

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Randall
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posted February 23, 2011 02:47 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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Mystic Melody
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posted February 25, 2011 11:56 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Mystic Melody     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
That was excellent.

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Randall
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posted February 26, 2011 10:59 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I like the short poems that yet feel complete.

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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PlutoSquared
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posted February 27, 2011 01:04 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for PlutoSquared     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I like this. It's genuine. I like that Him can mean God or your partner?

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Randall
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posted February 27, 2011 03:12 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I took the capital "H" to be God. But a poem can be anything the author wants it to be.

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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Virgo-AriesArtist
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posted February 27, 2011 08:43 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thanks for all the lovely comments, fellow Knowflakes

PlutoSquared, you are free as the reader to see "Him" however it makes the most sense for you, though my intention was referencing the Creator/God/Divine Spirit

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