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Topic: "Finding Ground"
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Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 228 From: Michigan :) Registered: Jun 2009
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posted February 21, 2011 10:29 PM
In the midst of falling I reach my ground And it's such a place to be A lovely cradling cavern where I find just what I need It takes just but a minute where I flip the mental page A time to seek sense such sparkling truth, and it chases out the rage I claim this earth as a refuge sent with faith yet unbetrayed the darkness holds no power here for with Him, I am unafraid IP: Logged |
Ami Anne Moderator Posts: 6626 From: Pluto/house next to NickiG Registered: Sep 2010
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posted February 21, 2011 10:39 PM
((((Virgo Aries Artist)))) ------------------ Jesus never put his trust in man cuz he knew what was in man. He who controls his Spirit is greater than he who controls a city Proverbs IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 6135 From: The Goober Galaxy Registered: Apr 2009
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posted February 23, 2011 02:47 PM
------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
Mystic Melody Moderator Posts: 108 From: IL Registered: Dec 2010
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posted February 25, 2011 11:56 PM
That was excellent. IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 6135 From: The Goober Galaxy Registered: Apr 2009
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posted February 26, 2011 10:59 AM
I like the short poems that yet feel complete.------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
PlutoSquared Moderator Posts: 3296 From: Mars Registered: Aug 2010
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posted February 27, 2011 01:04 AM
I like this. It's genuine. I like that Him can mean God or your partner?IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 6135 From: The Goober Galaxy Registered: Apr 2009
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posted February 27, 2011 03:12 AM
I took the capital "H" to be God. But a poem can be anything the author wants it to be.------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 228 From: Michigan :) Registered: Jun 2009
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posted February 27, 2011 08:43 AM
Thanks for all the lovely comments, fellow Knowflakes PlutoSquared, you are free as the reader to see "Him" however it makes the most sense for you, though my intention was referencing the Creator/God/Divine Spirit IP: Logged |