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posted February 27, 2011 12:26 AM            

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P2

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posted February 27, 2011 12:49 AM            

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I love it! Nice flow, and the edgy phrases really accentuate the images...

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posted February 27, 2011 12:55 AM            

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Originally posted by Virgo-AriesArtist:
I love it! Nice flow, and the edgy phrases really accentuate the images...

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Thanks, VAA

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posted February 27, 2011 03:29 AM            

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I've always thought you were a great writer (with impeccable grammar and substance both), but now I see you are not just all brains--you have a heart in there somewhere. Superb.

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posted February 28, 2011 12:48 AM            

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Originally posted by Randall:
I've always thought you were a great writer (with impeccable grammar and substance both), but now I see you are not just all brains--you have a heart in there somewhere. Superb.

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Thanks, Randall.

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posted February 28, 2011 12:59 AM            

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It's quite good. Post some more of your stuff.

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posted February 28, 2011 06:52 AM            

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Good stuff.

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posted March 03, 2011 12:01 PM            

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Fabulous!
More more!

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