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Topic: One
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lalitree
Knowflake Posts: 197
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Registered: Apr 2011
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posted September 21, 2011 03:10 PM
  
one is enough
just this once
just right now
one breath is all i need, right now
as i observe the air in me
that space between entering and departing
eternal as the glorious blue and grey sky above
and the never ending, ever changing song that says
in my one breath
that everything is happening
right now...IP: Logged |
abcd efg
Knowflake Posts: 1059
From: India
Registered: Mar 2011
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posted September 22, 2011 09:31 AM
lalitree, WoW! How does it feel to experience this? Its beautiful to read. Thanks!IP: Logged |
lalitree
Knowflake Posts: 197
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Registered: Apr 2011
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posted September 22, 2011 05:31 PM
how does it feel? hmmm--well, one feeling can't really describe everything...IP: Logged |
Mysticknowflake
Knowflake Posts: 292
From: PA
Registered: Mar 2010
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posted September 24, 2011 03:56 AM
Wonderful!IP: Logged |
Emeraldopal
Knowflake Posts: 568
From: U
Registered: Apr 2011
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posted September 24, 2011 01:20 PM
Lalitree, that is BEaUtiful!------------------
All my love, with all my Heart
lotusheartone IP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 11825
From: The Goober Galaxy
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted September 25, 2011 02:54 PM
Loves it!------------------
I have CDO. It's like OCD, but the letters are in alphabetical order, as they should be. IP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 11825
From: The Goober Galaxy
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted September 29, 2011 01:35 PM
I like short poems that say so much in so many layers.IP: Logged |
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