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Topic: "Adrift"
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Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 377 From: Michigan :) Registered: Jun 2009
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posted December 01, 2011 06:30 PM
Dangle over the solid mist with a limitless descent Grasping at fading starlight when you'd settle for a friend Aching for the fullfillment Satisfaction from within Feeling jaded and hopeless here As defeat begins to win Why is purpose difficult, when does faith run dry? When do the tears stop bursting out, and why does success seem a lie?IP: Logged |
Cancer/Scorpio729 Moderator Posts: 1197 From: 6,000 feet above sea level Registered: Feb 2010
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posted December 01, 2011 08:07 PM
Yes IP: Logged |
Mysticknowflake Knowflake Posts: 627 From: PA Registered: Mar 2010
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posted December 02, 2011 09:14 AM
beautiful!IP: Logged |
LEXX Moderator Posts: 8623 From: Still out looking for Schrodinger's cat.......& LEXIGRAMMING.♥.. is my Passion! Registered: Apr 2009
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posted December 03, 2011 12:04 PM
Yes, lovely and poignant. ------------------ The mass of men lead lives of quiet desperation. What is called resignation is confirmed desperation A stereotyped but unconscious despair is concealed even under what are called the games and amusements of mankind. ~Henry David Thoreau IP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 377 From: Michigan :) Registered: Jun 2009
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posted December 16, 2011 11:37 PM
Thanks, Mysticknowflake, Cancer/Scorpio729, and Lexx!I'm grateful to the depths for my unceasing inspiration IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 13987 From: Saturn next to Charmainec Registered: Apr 2009
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posted December 17, 2011 03:58 PM
Stirring.------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
LEXX Moderator Posts: 8623 From: Still out looking for Schrodinger's cat.......& LEXIGRAMMING.♥.. is my Passion! Registered: Apr 2009
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posted December 18, 2011 10:05 PM
Still love it! IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 13987 From: Saturn next to Charmainec Registered: Apr 2009
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posted December 19, 2011 10:41 AM
I love short ones.------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
Alma Sun Moderator Posts: 740 From: The East Coast Registered: Mar 2011
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posted December 19, 2011 04:45 PM
Beautiful ------------------ "I am not absentminded. It is the presence of mind that makes me unaware of everything else." ― G.K. Chesterton IP: Logged |