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Topic: A poem--
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virgolotus
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posted March 29, 2012 10:16 PM
  
I wrote in jail after having a 'spiritual experience' that I needed to Change my ways and renew myself in order to live.
I was searching endlessly for my true identity,
I remember never having anything close to serenity,
I heard no words from such familiar voices,
I saw the world that surrounded me fading,
I worried of no worries; destiny was closing in on my choices
I thought of being forever strung out;
But, I want to change.
I am the scholar known as common sense;
Not the prejudice which was in pretense,
I think people should dread; conscience is dead,
I need not shower with pride; but glow in humble light,
I try to not give in to my craving; that means no more raving,
I feel finally awakened from my shame,
I forgive no one; for I am to blame,
Now I can change.
I will reclaim my soul; never again sell it for gold,
I choose to follow the path of righteousness;
Never again have an altered consciousness,
I dream of being successful;
Never again feeling like a failure,
I hope to attain the faith I need to strive;
Never again just wait and cry,
I predict myself living it up drinking rum;
Never again in the slums,
I know that day is not far gone,
I will change.
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To die would be an awfully big adventure. IP: Logged |
Randall
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posted March 30, 2012 11:23 AM
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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
T
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posted March 31, 2012 02:20 PM
Very nice.  IP: Logged |
virgolotus
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posted April 01, 2012 12:35 AM
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Originally posted by T:
Very nice.
Thanks! ^_^ IP: Logged |
Randall
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posted April 08, 2012 02:01 PM
*bump*------------------
"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
mirage29
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Registered: May 2012
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posted March 30, 2013 02:51 AM
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mirage29
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posted March 30, 2013 02:57 AM
You've got me actually crying... that was beautiful, virgolotus... thankyou!  IP: Logged |
virgolotus
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posted March 30, 2013 03:46 AM
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Originally posted by mirage29:
You've got me actually crying... that was beautiful, virgolotus... thankyou!
I'm honored.  IP: Logged |
Little Doe
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posted April 01, 2013 06:18 AM
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Originally posted by virgolotus:
I'm honored.
I´m also touched. That was lovely. thanks. IP: Logged |
charmainec
Moderator Posts: 6325
From: Venus next to Randall
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 02, 2013 08:11 AM
 A rainbow for good things ahead.
Very touching poem. ------------------
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Remember, love can conquer the influences of the planets....It can even eliminate karma.
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Lexxigramer
Moderator Posts: 2149
From: The Etheric Realms...Still out looking for Schrodinger's cat...& LEXIGRAMMING.♥.. is my Passion!
Registered: Feb 2012
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posted April 02, 2013 12:24 PM
quote:
Originally posted by virgolotus:
I wrote in jail after having a 'spiritual experience' that I needed to Change my ways and renew myself in order to live.
I was searching endlessly for my true identity,
I remember never having anything close to serenity,
I heard no words from such familiar voices,
I saw the world that surrounded me fading,
I worried of no worries; destiny was closing in on my choices
I thought of being forever strung out;
But, I want to change.
I am the scholar known as common sense;
Not the prejudice which was in pretense,
I think people should dread; conscience is dead,
I need not shower with pride; but glow in humble light,
I try to not give in to my craving; that means no more raving,
I feel finally awakened from my shame,
I forgive no one; for I am to blame,
Now I can change.
I will reclaim my soul; never again sell it for gold,
I choose to follow the path of righteousness;
Never again have an altered consciousness,
I dream of being successful;
Never again feeling like a failure,
I hope to attain the faith I need to strive;
Never again just wait and cry,
I predict myself living it up drinking rum;
Never again in the slums,
I know that day is not far gone,
I will change.
Love your poem.{{{hugs}}}
This is a tiny bit of what I found so far when I Lexigrammed your full birth name:
I AM IN JAIL
RUM GONE IN ME AGAIN.
I AM ALONE IN JAIL
I AM GONE IN JAIL
 NO MORE AM I IN JAIL !
GO ME NO MORE IN A JAIL AGAIN!
GO NO MORE RUM IN ME AGAIN!
 Edit to add:
I added to your Lexigram above,
so here is the expanded version. I AM IN JAIL
RUM GONE IN ME AGAIN.
I AM ALONE IN JAIL
I AM A GONE MAN
ALONE IN A JAIL
NO LONGER AM I A GONE MAN IN A JAIL !
GONE AM I NO LONGER IN A JAIL AGAIN!
NO MORE RUM GO IN ME AGAIN!
Of course much much more can be found from the letters of your full birth name.
Those are just brief examples.
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Lexxigramer
Moderator Posts: 2149
From: The Etheric Realms...Still out looking for Schrodinger's cat...& LEXIGRAMMING.♥.. is my Passion!
Registered: Feb 2012
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posted April 02, 2013 01:51 PM
Virgolotus
Posted this at Health And Healing on your thread there titled:
Heart problem or Anxiety?Then I saw you write there about wanting to
be normal again.
You said:
quote:
But I do know for a fact that I want to be normal again
Interestingly
this line can be found within the letters of your full birth name:
I AM A NORMAL MAN AGAIN
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virgolotus
Knowflake Posts: 1082
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Registered: Jan 2012
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posted April 03, 2013 02:06 PM
Thank you everyone for the feedback!! IP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 26597
From: Saturn next to Charmainec
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 04, 2013 09:22 AM
Transformative.IP: Logged |
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