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posted April 26, 2012 10:07 PM            

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Shallow shady ground beneath
Love so gone you cannot breathe
Bring us to a place
Where I do not care
Can't find my heart in pain again

Tangle it within the grain
show me a new depth of misery
Make me cold and sane

Lost but found in my own collapse
Loved and gone
Our door closes in a snap
Brought to knees
Care's null and void
Living now in an empty hole

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posted April 27, 2012 11:04 AM            

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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posted April 27, 2012 11:52 AM            

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(((hugs)))
Great poetry skills.

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From: Michigan :)
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posted May 13, 2012 09:45 AM            

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Thanks, Randall and T I appreciate you reading and commenting!

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