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charmainec Moderator Posts: 4510 From: Venus next to Randall Registered: Apr 2009	posted May 15, 2012 05:21 AM From where I stand now I can see I'm not your star and never will be You've started buring me in the sand and even though you see my hand raised above the ground hoping you would reach out and help me surface again you ignore the plea because it's only me I do not shine as bright or make you gasp with anticipation I do not make you want to scream out to the world.. Clasping my hands to my face feeling the trickling streams of tears trying to make their way down my face I remember the affections you've down played for the sake of sparing the feelings of another I realize, I'm not your star and never will be ------------------ quote: Remember, love can conquer the influences of the planets....It can even eliminate karma. Linda Goodman IP: Logged
Ceridwen Moderator Posts: 3008 From: Registered: Jul 2011	posted May 15, 2012 06:21 AM This is sad beauty. It really spoke to me, the athmosphere you set from the first stanza, the repetition indicating that it is like a neverending circle, evoking a feeling of "no escape". It is beautiful, and yet so unbelievably sad. I hope it is not something you have to go through. IP: Logged
charmainec Moderator Posts: 4510 From: Venus next to Randall Registered: Apr 2009	posted May 15, 2012 11:31 AM Thank you, Ceri. From one sensitive soul to another. IP: Logged
teasel Knowflake Posts: 4577 From: Registered: Apr 2009	posted May 15, 2012 12:55 PM I've been made to feel that more than once - it sucks (to put it mildly). IP: Logged
charmainec Moderator Posts: 4510 From: Venus next to Randall Registered: Apr 2009	posted May 16, 2012 02:37 AM This is part one and yes, it's a horrid feeling most can relate to. IP: Logged
Randall Webmaster Posts: 18468 From: Saturn next to Charmainec Registered: Apr 2009	posted May 16, 2012 04:26 PM Amazingly written. Great words that stir with emotion. It's "burying." Here's my retort: Change your perspective And you will see... You have always been And will always be... The North Star to me. ------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged
charmainec Moderator Posts: 4510 From: Venus next to Randall Registered: Apr 2009	posted May 17, 2012 09:16 AM ------------------ quote: Remember, love can conquer the influences of the planets....It can even eliminate karma. Linda Goodman IP: Logged
Randall Webmaster Posts: 18468 From: Saturn next to Charmainec Registered: Apr 2009	posted May 17, 2012 02:41 PM The North Star is, of course, the brightest star in the sky...but it also points the weary traveler back home. ------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged
Cancer/Scorpio729 Moderator Posts: 1501 From: 6,000 feet above sea level Registered: Feb 2010	posted May 17, 2012 10:16 PM quote: Originally posted by charmainec: I realize, I'm not your star and never will be I love that line IP: Logged
charmainec Moderator Posts: 4510 From: Venus next to Randall Registered: Apr 2009	posted May 18, 2012 06:05 AM Hey, CS! Yeah, and don't ever allow anyone to make you feel that way. ------------------ quote: Remember, love can conquer the influences of the planets....It can even eliminate karma. Linda Goodman IP: Logged
charmainec Moderator Posts: 4510 From: Venus next to Randall Registered: Apr 2009	posted May 18, 2012 06:06 AM I know what the North Star is, Randall. IP: Logged
charmainec Moderator Posts: 4510 From: Venus next to Randall Registered: Apr 2009	posted May 18, 2012 06:20 AM You know what, Teasel? We're too nice. Maybe if we were loud, vulgar and sexually explicite, we'd be more attractive? You know, like how how guys say girls like bad boys? But then again we won't be true to ourselves. For some reason people associate the word NICE with boring which is a big fat lie. And then you get the ones who complain they want someone who's honest, faithful etc but when they have it, it isn't good enough either! Argh, ranting now. IP: Logged
charmainec Moderator Posts: 4510 From: Venus next to Randall Registered: Apr 2009	posted May 18, 2012 06:35 AM All this makes me think of Adele's song - Set Fire to the Rain. ------------------ quote: Remember, love can conquer the influences of the planets....It can even eliminate karma. Linda Goodman IP: Logged
Waterlilly Moderator Posts: 126 From: Registered: Mar 2012	posted May 18, 2012 09:53 AM Ceridwen described it perfectly "sad beauty" The words of your poem are alive I love it ------------------ quote: Thousands of candles can be lighted from a single candle, and the life of the candle will not be shortened. Happiness never decreases by being shared. - Buddha IP: Logged
Randall Webmaster Posts: 18468 From: Saturn next to Charmainec Registered: Apr 2009	posted May 18, 2012 01:45 PM I just wanted to make sure you understood the part about pointing home as well. You are quite the antithesis of boring! ------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged
charmainec Moderator Posts: 4510 From: Venus next to Randall Registered: Apr 2009	posted May 19, 2012 04:06 PM I see. IP: Logged
Randall Webmaster Posts: 18468 From: Saturn next to Charmainec Registered: Apr 2009	posted May 20, 2012 09:49 AM growl ------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged
Yin Moderator Posts: 2600 From: Registered: Apr 2009	posted May 20, 2012 12:16 PM Pain makes us feel alive. IP: Logged
Randall Webmaster Posts: 18468 From: Saturn next to Charmainec Registered: Apr 2009	posted May 23, 2012 09:26 AM Pain happens when we need to listen to something. ------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged
charmainec Moderator Posts: 4510 From: Venus next to Randall Registered: Apr 2009	posted May 23, 2012 10:43 AM Quite. ------------------ quote: Remember, love can conquer the influences of the planets....It can even eliminate karma. Linda Goodman IP: Logged
Alma Sun Moderator Posts: 1607 From: The East Coast Registered: Mar 2011	posted May 23, 2012 01:27 PM Beautifully written. Reminds me of how I felt in the past Venus retro. quote: Maybe if we were loud, vulgar and sexually explicit, we'd be more attractive? A little late, but I have to say I disagree. I think what's attractive in a person is being themselves. And plus, being 'loud, vulgar and sexually explicit' sounds like they're suffering from histrionic personality disorder. ------------------ "The snake which cannot cast its skin has to die. As well the minds which are prevented from changing their opinions; they cease to be mind." --- Friedrich Nietzsche IP: Logged
charmainec Moderator Posts: 4510 From: Venus next to Randall Registered: Apr 2009	posted May 24, 2012 01:46 AM Thanks, Alma and lol. It was just an example of what seems to get some mens attention and yes, some of them actually find it attractive. ------------------ quote: Remember, love can conquer the influences of the planets....It can even eliminate karma. Linda Goodman IP: Logged

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