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Swift Freeze
Knowflake

Posts: 152
From: One World
Registered: Nov 2009

posted July 03, 2012 05:48 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Swift Freeze     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Its written all over the place, its written all over your face,
You can add a few more lines if you like, but I won't believe a word, you say,

A hundred thousand times, your words are always mixed with lies,
And you try to hide away, inside yourself but I see, through,

You as you tell me, that things are fine honestly,
Your lips begin to tremble, and thats the key, I need,

Just like a diary, your every thought is written for me, to see,
How could you know how could you tell, this was to be the day you fell, for me,

I sense the panic see the fear, as you see me getting near-er,
You try to smile act all cool, but I catch you shed that single, tear,

I slide your hand into mine, give it a squeeze to let you know its all fine,
As I hold you in my arms, I feel your tears begin to fade, away,

As I let you go, I hope that you know,
Just how much it means, for me to be here with you, now,

Just like diary, your every thought is written for me, to see,
How could you know how could you tell, this was to be the day you fell, for me,

I look at you as my heart starts to pound, as not sound,
Escapes our lips, but I know that it fits, perfectly,

You slide your hand into mine, give it a squeeze to let me know its all fine,
As you hold me in your arms, I can't help but feel whole, now,

You wouldn't let me go, and I hope that you know,
As I look into your eyes, that you were worth all the time,

Just like a diary, my every thought is written for you, to see,
How could I know how could I tell, this was to be the day I fell, for you...

Just wanted to share this,

Hope everyone has a great day.

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Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams.

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heartstrings
Knowflake

Posts: 318
From: the pineapple under the sea
Registered: Aug 2011

posted July 03, 2012 06:09 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for heartstrings     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
naaaw i loved it :')

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Randall
Webmaster

Posts: 20620
From: Saturn next to Charmainec
Registered: Apr 2009

posted July 03, 2012 10:08 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Moving to the right Forum.

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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Randall
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Posts: 20620
From: Saturn next to Charmainec
Registered: Apr 2009

posted July 04, 2012 12:30 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Great, by the way!

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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Virgo-AriesArtist
Knowflake

Posts: 593
From: Michigan :)
Registered: Jun 2009

posted August 11, 2012 11:49 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Wow, such direct sentiment, and bittersweet too.

Good job!

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