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From: MidWest :)
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posted October 24, 2012 11:25 PM            

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Do you reach out when the sky's grown black,
when that world is about to blow?
Can you find a reason to be unsafe
or do you shut down and finally let go?

When the heart of another is dangerous,
and you're not sure you'll survive another round,
You must find the tipping point of caring
where support, not insanity's found.

Can you care without being bound,
for any outcome's beyond your control
or should you just close your eyes and pray
staying steady in your distant role?

Can you live with your choice today,
or will you let it be a haunting chain?
Somehow you must remove all indecision,
or risk perpetual pain...

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posted October 25, 2012 10:35 AM            

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This would make a good song.

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"Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark

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posted October 25, 2012 10:52 AM            

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Originally posted by Randall:
This would make a good song.

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Oooo, I like the way you think, Randall!

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posted October 26, 2012 10:34 AM            

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posted October 27, 2012 11:48 AM            

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It has that song-like flow to it.

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