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Topic: To the Poets
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Faith Knowflake Posts: 2807 From: Registered: Jul 2011
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posted November 04, 2012 10:31 AM
Whipped this up spontaneously as a response to Derrick C. Brown's A Finger, Two Dots, then Me. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jidS7djf0yM It applies to all the poetry I love. 1 Vivid is a love song Clarity a kiss For specks of comprehension I've lingered on like this.
2 Speech can knit completion Language bridging rifts Spirit loops a circuit And I feel the planet shift. 3 Poignancy one-ups itself The song plays through the spheres A music that's electric, secret angels in our ears. 4 You've consecrated closeness With these rudiments of sound A simple phrase that wanders long And thus my heart is found. A little corny but so am I. IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 23512 From: Saturn next to Charmainec Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 06, 2012 11:21 AM
Awww...------------------ "Never mentally imagine for another that which you would not want to experience for yourself, since the mental image you send out inevitably comes back to you." Rebecca Clark IP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 812 From: MidWest :) Registered: Jun 2009
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posted November 10, 2012 06:37 PM
LOVE this, Faith! So poignant and lyrical, very beautiful to read. Thanks so much for sharing ------------------ Check out my poetry! <3 https://www.facebook.com/KKaneskyPoet IP: Logged |
Faith Knowflake Posts: 2807 From: Registered: Jul 2011
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posted November 11, 2012 10:22 PM
Thanks!IP: Logged |
Swift Freeze Knowflake Posts: 169 From: One World Registered: Nov 2009
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posted November 30, 2012 08:27 AM
All 4 verses are beautiful.------------------ Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams. IP: Logged |
pippastrelle Knowflake Posts: 90 From: Registered: Nov 2012
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posted November 30, 2012 08:53 AM
I agree, beautiful verses!! Excellent! IP: Logged |
Faith Knowflake Posts: 2807 From: Registered: Jul 2011
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posted December 01, 2012 08:56 AM
Glad it made sense!Here is the really excellent short film for "A Finger, Two Dots, then Me." I didn't post it at first because the video kept stalling on me: Awesomeness IP: Logged |
Swift Freeze Knowflake Posts: 169 From: One World Registered: Nov 2009
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posted December 02, 2012 06:08 AM
That is a beautiful poem and Derrick Brown is an outstanding reader, and writer. Thank you for sharing, I really connected with that, thank you.------------------ Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams. IP: Logged |