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pippastrelle
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posted November 15, 2012 01:20 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for pippastrelle     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Fledgling

My once impenetrable refuge, my Inner Sanctum,

Invaded and defiled,

and left to drown in a tempestuous lake,

of unabating sorrow


Powerful is this elixir that courses through my veins,

teasing, tormenting, captivating, and alluring,

no rest will it give I.


Tears rain down on the mossy ground where I lie

like shards of fractured glass,

glistering and dancing in the light of the moon

mocking my unrelenting grief.


The chill night breeze howls it's plaintive cry through the overhead trees

In sympathy with my own mournful lament,

Outstretched branches reaching down

like a lover's arms to comfort me.


Oh release this hostage from my veins,

let this merciless elixir flow like a river

onto the icy forest floor beneath me


Euphoria envelopes me like a blanket of sweet opium

as the hostage trickles free

warm and sensual against my cold and pallid skin.


Fleeting memories of a smile, a touch, an embrace, assail my senses

holding them dear in a moment frozen in time,

until they fade like faceless spectres

into the murky shadows of this endless night.


But the Morn will break

and the fledgling will take flight

and I on it's wing

Reborn

by Pippastrelle (Barb)

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Randall
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posted November 24, 2012 12:38 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Ooohhh...dramatic! Very vivid!

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Faith
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posted November 24, 2012 06:06 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Faith     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Freakin' COOL!!!

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pippastrelle
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posted November 25, 2012 10:07 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for pippastrelle     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thanks for the comments ,guys and gals, much appreciated!

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