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pippastrelle
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posted December 05, 2012 10:57 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for pippastrelle     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Uninvited Guest

a guest uninvited

holds residence in the temple

crept silently with feline stealth

as it slid between the mantel.

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Invisible to eye or ear,

a ferocious battle thus ensued

multitudes of scarlet ninjas

their purpose to defend

curtail the brazen interlopers,

from their merciless, parasitic ends.

****

Emotions polar and extreme

callous nature of the beast,

like a joker with his menacing grin

on the turmoil he doth feast.


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But the banquet it is fleeting

scarlet ninjas imbued with cosmic light

their protector and eternal friend

will ensure victory in the fight.

Barb (copyrighted)


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Faith
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posted December 06, 2012 11:00 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Faith     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I like the flavor of this one, so many interesting words, but it's too mysterious for me to grasp. Would you interpret it a little for me please?

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pippastrelle
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posted December 07, 2012 06:58 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for pippastrelle     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Hi Faith, thanks for the comment. Yeah, sometimes my stuff can be a little cryptic, my mind works in a strange way lol
The poem is about illness; the temple is the body, the scarlet ninjas are the blood cells fighting the disease.

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Faith
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posted December 07, 2012 01:26 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Faith     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
NOW I get it!

I'm pretty wimpy and can't imagine my immune system as ninjas.

Maybe I should!

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