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pippastrelle
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posted December 09, 2012 12:52 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for pippastrelle     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Tried to edit with my phone and deleted entire poem lol :$

Hello Stranger

Over thirty years we've been acquainted,

it seems I know you less and less,

when I think I've got to the heart of you

my opinion I'm compelled to redress.

***

An enigma within a conundrum,

a jigsaw puzzle without the final piece,

standing face to face in eyelock

my curiosity will not cease.

***

But to obsess on this quandary,

analyse every word and thought,

would be indulgence most folly

time lost that cant be bought.

***

So I'll cover ever mirror

with a cloth of darkest hue,

and let the stranger walk her path

and on her journey ,to herself be true.

by Barb

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Virgo-AriesArtist
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posted December 10, 2012 12:17 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Nice twist at the end...didn't know you were speaking of yourself

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pippastrelle
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posted December 10, 2012 07:34 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for pippastrelle     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thanks for the comment, Virgo-AriesArtist, glad you liked the twist.
The line "face to face in eyelock ", is myself looking at my reflection in the mirror.


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