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Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 824 From: MidWest :) Registered: Jun 2009
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posted December 09, 2012 11:52 PM
Drawn in past comfort pulled in beyond will Your reason is twisting and common sense just might spillYou banter and tease You feel so alive Precise words volley quickly and your senses take a dive Physical and mental so many cues to react A twinkling eye beckons and unleashes your tact Words are your forte and verbal spars warm your skin When the mind spirals delightfully You will always win ------------------ Check out my poetry! <3 https://www.facebook.com/KKaneskyPoet IP: Logged |
pippastrelle Knowflake Posts: 120 From: Registered: Nov 2012
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posted December 10, 2012 07:39 AM
Love it, beautiful use of words and arrangement. IP: Logged |
Faith Knowflake Posts: 2854 From: Registered: Jul 2011
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posted December 10, 2012 09:59 PM
I love it too!(Except, it reminds me of one time that I fell in love against my will....Pretty sure he was Scorpio rising and it wasn't my fault, it's like he hypnotized me.... ) But anyway! Thanks for this, I can relate.
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Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 824 From: MidWest :) Registered: Jun 2009
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posted December 10, 2012 10:13 PM
OMG, that is hilarious, Faith! The person I wrote about interacting with in this poem is *also* Scorpio Rising You are welcome, glad we can share an experience ------------------ Check out my poetry! <3 https://www.facebook.com/KKaneskyPoet IP: Logged |