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Virgo-AriesArtist
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posted December 09, 2012 11:52 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Drawn in past comfort
pulled in beyond will
Your reason is twisting
and common sense just might spill

You banter and tease
You feel so alive
Precise words volley quickly
and your senses take a dive

Physical and mental
so many cues to react
A twinkling eye beckons
and unleashes your tact

Words are your forte
and verbal spars warm your skin
When the mind spirals delightfully
You will always win

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pippastrelle
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posted December 10, 2012 07:39 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for pippastrelle     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Love it, beautiful use of words and arrangement.

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Faith
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posted December 10, 2012 09:59 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Faith     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I love it too!

(Except, it reminds me of one time that I fell in love against my will....Pretty sure he was Scorpio rising and it wasn't my fault, it's like he hypnotized me.... )

But anyway!

Thanks for this, I can relate.


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Virgo-AriesArtist
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posted December 10, 2012 10:13 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
OMG, that is hilarious, Faith! The person I wrote about interacting with in this poem is *also* Scorpio Rising

You are welcome, glad we can share an experience

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