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pippastrelle
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posted December 10, 2012 08:40 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for pippastrelle     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Child of Neptune

Never did fit in to the restrictive box

corners too rigid , angles too sharp

hard and unyielding, no space to soar

crushing pressure on the soul

wreaking havoc on the flesh

uncompromising prison , spirit nailed to the floor.

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but I will dream me a dream,

escape my geometric slot

to where corners are soft like buttercream

angles wide like the eagle's span,

ascending like a freebird to my home

farthest from the Sun

my inner child will finally scream.


by Barb (copyrighted)

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Faith
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posted December 10, 2012 09:54 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Faith     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I LOVE IT!!

~ Pisces moon, 'can relate.

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pippastrelle
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posted December 11, 2012 05:57 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for pippastrelle     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thank you, Faith!

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Brennie369
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posted December 13, 2012 02:47 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Brennie369     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
GREAT poem! I like your writing style.

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pippastrelle
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posted December 13, 2012 05:02 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for pippastrelle     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thank you for your kind comment, Brennie, much appreciated

And welcome to the site

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Brennie369
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posted December 13, 2012 05:07 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Brennie369     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thanx!

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taureau20
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posted January 07, 2013 03:51 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for taureau20     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Nice poem full of ardent faith!

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mirage29
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posted January 28, 2013 08:28 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

I read this article on transiting Neptune... and thought of you...

Jeff Jawer, Posted on January 22, 2013
TITLE: Neptune in Pisces: Dream the Impossible Dream
http://www.stariq.com/pagetemplate/article.asp?PageID=11826


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pippastrelle
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posted January 29, 2013 05:30 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for pippastrelle     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thank you very much, Mirage, nice of you to think of me , very thoughtful. Very interesting article too

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Icygrace
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posted January 31, 2013 04:49 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Icygrace     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Beautiful

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charmainec
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posted January 31, 2013 05:41 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for charmainec     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Great poem!

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Remember, love can conquer the influences of the planets....It can even eliminate karma.

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