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Virgo-AriesArtist
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posted December 13, 2012 08:07 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Get out of my emotional bubble
Stay the heck off the path of my hunches
I'm tired of tripping over you here
As you wander back around

Planet of fog and clarity,
Please pick one direction and stick it out
When you keep sticking my Moon with a sharp stick
I'm just tempted to find a nice dark cave

You make me lose my center
You show me things I'll never have
Why do you like these mirages,
why is my pain such a game?

I can't put faith in hunches
My gut has lost it's knack
I grab onto things that should be real
And find I'm delusional or missing facts

I'd like to trust what people say
I'd love to have my radar back
Show me what I need to placate you
And I'll gladly give you all of that

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pippastrelle
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posted December 14, 2012 06:34 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for pippastrelle     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Love it, very descriptive

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Faith
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posted December 15, 2012 07:57 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Faith     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
^ Me, too! And THIS:

"why is my pain such a game?"

Hits the spot for me.

I have Venus conjunct Neptune, so especially when I dated men my age, Neptune was always yanking me (us) around big time. It felt like I was being forced to learn that love is the most important, magical thing...that can disappear in a split second and punish you for believing in it in the first place.

Crazy.

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posted December 17, 2012 05:40 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
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Originally posted by Faith:
^ Me, too! And THIS:

"why is my pain such a game?"

Hits the spot for me.

I have Venus conjunct Neptune, so especially when I dated men my age, Neptune was always yanking me (us) around big time. It felt like I was being forced to learn that love is the most important, magical thing...that can disappear in a split second and punish you for believing in it in the first place.

Crazy.


Venus conjunct Neptune...you must feel a real idealistic view of love, and be super sensitive to your loved ones...it's such a neat gift, even when the pain feels blinding.

I feel fortunate to be able to share this moment of time with you, as true empathy dilutes the sting...and it reminds me of another poem of mine, which I will try to bump up as I know you'll feel it too

P.S. It's about half-way down the thread titled "another dumb poem", called 'Distribeel'...

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Faith
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posted December 17, 2012 11:16 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Faith     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Virgo-AriesArtist:

I feel fortunate to be able to share this moment of time with you, as true empathy dilutes the sting...and it reminds me of another poem of mine, which I will try to bump up as I know you'll feel it too

P.S. It's about half-way down the thread titled "another dumb poem", called 'Distribeel'...


Thank you~ I commented there! When I read your comment earlier today, I was in a hurry, and didn't notice you were referring to a poem YOU wrote. So I was happily surprised to find three poems on the thread!

There's a line from a song I like called Alright by Reamonn....it goes, "Reach for the love that's all around." In other words, just NOTICE that you really aren't alone!

But then I'm always wondering to myself...is that really true? Is it like an ocean of empathy out there?

The poems you shared helped me tap deeper into the fact that it's true.

Much appreciated!

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Cancer/Scorpio729
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posted December 22, 2012 12:45 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Cancer/Scorpio729     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
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Originally posted by Virgo-AriesArtist:
Planet of fog and clarity,
Please pick one direction and stick it out
When you keep sticking my Moon with a sharp stick
I'm just tempted to find a nice dark cave


Oh you and me both!

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mirage29
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posted January 19, 2013 02:23 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I echo to you what Faith said. We may be in this 'fog' together, waiting... thinking that we're all alone.

But there IS one thing we have: we can be each other's fog horn... We can take turns, and call out and be reminded by each other that it's gonna be Alright (Raemonn) [4:05] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ur94hYL-zx8

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charmainec
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posted January 20, 2013 11:13 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for charmainec     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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Remember, love can conquer the influences of the planets....It can even eliminate karma.

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ballerina
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posted March 21, 2019 01:19 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for ballerina     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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All my love, with all my Heart
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Virgo-AriesArtist
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posted April 21, 2019 08:22 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Virgo-AriesArtist     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Old, and yet still true

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