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Topic: "Banished Fog " ~ An Ode to Neptune
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Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 1055 From: MidWest :) Registered: Jun 2009
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posted December 13, 2012 08:07 AM
Get out of my emotional bubble Stay the heck off the path of my hunches I'm tired of tripping over you here As you wander back around Planet of fog and clarity, Please pick one direction and stick it out When you keep sticking my Moon with a sharp stick I'm just tempted to find a nice dark cave You make me lose my center You show me things I'll never have Why do you like these mirages, why is my pain such a game? I can't put faith in hunches My gut has lost it's knack I grab onto things that should be real And find I'm delusional or missing facts I'd like to trust what people say I'd love to have my radar back Show me what I need to placate you And I'll gladly give you all of that ------------------ Check out my poetry! <3 https://www.facebook.com/KKaneskyPoet IP: Logged |
pippastrelle Knowflake Posts: 298 From: Registered: Nov 2012
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posted December 14, 2012 06:34 AM
Love it, very descriptive IP: Logged |
Faith Knowflake Posts: 21731 From: Bella's Hair Salon Registered: Jul 2011
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posted December 15, 2012 07:57 AM
^ Me, too! And THIS:"why is my pain such a game?" Hits the spot for me. I have Venus conjunct Neptune, so especially when I dated men my age, Neptune was always yanking me (us) around big time. It felt like I was being forced to learn that love is the most important, magical thing...that can disappear in a split second and punish you for believing in it in the first place. Crazy. IP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 1055 From: MidWest :) Registered: Jun 2009
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posted December 17, 2012 05:40 PM
quote: Originally posted by Faith: ^ Me, too! And THIS:"why is my pain such a game?" Hits the spot for me. I have Venus conjunct Neptune, so especially when I dated men my age, Neptune was always yanking me (us) around big time. It felt like I was being forced to learn that love is the most important, magical thing...that can disappear in a split second and punish you for believing in it in the first place. Crazy.
Venus conjunct Neptune...you must feel a real idealistic view of love, and be super sensitive to your loved ones...it's such a neat gift, even when the pain feels blinding. I feel fortunate to be able to share this moment of time with you, as true empathy dilutes the sting...and it reminds me of another poem of mine, which I will try to bump up as I know you'll feel it too P.S. It's about half-way down the thread titled "another dumb poem", called 'Distribeel'... ------------------ Check out my poetry! <3 https://www.facebook.com/KKaneskyPoet IP: Logged |
Faith Knowflake Posts: 21731 From: Bella's Hair Salon Registered: Jul 2011
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posted December 17, 2012 11:16 PM
quote: Originally posted by Virgo-AriesArtist: I feel fortunate to be able to share this moment of time with you, as true empathy dilutes the sting...and it reminds me of another poem of mine, which I will try to bump up as I know you'll feel it too P.S. It's about half-way down the thread titled "another dumb poem", called 'Distribeel'...
Thank you~ I commented there! When I read your comment earlier today, I was in a hurry, and didn't notice you were referring to a poem YOU wrote. So I was happily surprised to find three poems on the thread! There's a line from a song I like called Alright by Reamonn....it goes, "Reach for the love that's all around." In other words, just NOTICE that you really aren't alone! But then I'm always wondering to myself...is that really true? Is it like an ocean of empathy out there? The poems you shared helped me tap deeper into the fact that it's true. Much appreciated! IP: Logged |
Cancer/Scorpio729 Moderator Posts: 2282 From: 6,000 feet above sea level Registered: Feb 2010
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posted December 22, 2012 12:45 AM
quote: Originally posted by Virgo-AriesArtist: Planet of fog and clarity, Please pick one direction and stick it out When you keep sticking my Moon with a sharp stick I'm just tempted to find a nice dark cave
Oh you and me both! IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 11318 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted January 19, 2013 02:23 AM
I echo to you what Faith said. We may be in this 'fog' together, waiting... thinking that we're all alone.But there IS one thing we have: we can be each other's fog horn... We can take turns, and call out and be reminded by each other that it's gonna be Alright (Raemonn) [4:05] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ur94hYL-zx8 IP: Logged |
charmainec Knowflake Posts: 8746 From: Venus next to Randall Registered: Apr 2009
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posted January 20, 2013 11:13 AM
------------------ quote: Remember, love can conquer the influences of the planets....It can even eliminate karma.
Linda GoodmanIP: Logged |
ballerina Moderator Posts: 1659 From: A Place on Earth Registered: Feb 2014
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posted March 21, 2019 01:19 AM
------------------ All my love, with all my Heart lotusheartone/Emeraldopal IP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 1055 From: MidWest :) Registered: Jun 2009
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posted April 21, 2019 08:22 PM
Old, and yet still true ------------------ Check out my poetry! <3 https://www.facebook.com/KKaneskyPoet IP: Logged |