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Topic: How New Love Is
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Faith
Knowflake Posts: 3111
From:
Registered: Jul 2011
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posted December 15, 2012 08:28 AM
  
I approach you already in gratitude
For the open space in your heartSuspicionless, non-accusative
Unseeing my mistakes
That wore out...
(Let's just forget who)
That remind me
I'm entitled to nothing and nobody in the end. 'Just a banged-up, screwy mortal,
Another concoction of confusion
Like the last one you met But ahhh.... In this magical unsuspecting time
Where we in tandem hope
Against all reason for lasting perfection
I can love you, as if for always... And these sentiments are eternal
If only lived in instants
If only really dreams. IP: Logged |
Brennie369
Newflake Posts: 16
From: Littleton, CO USA
Registered: Dec 2012
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posted December 15, 2012 11:08 AM
Love it!IP: Logged |
Faith
Knowflake Posts: 3111
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Registered: Jul 2011
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posted December 16, 2012 12:36 AM
Thank you! But I just read it over again and it doesn't sound right... Will have to work on it more before it gets published. Kidding  I wrote this a long time ago and thought I would share it, just for fun. IP: Logged |
Swift Freeze
Knowflake Posts: 199
From: One World
Registered: Nov 2009
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posted December 17, 2012 05:10 AM
Thank you for sharing Faith.- Chris ------------------
Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams. IP: Logged |
pippastrelle
Knowflake Posts: 140
From: Ireland
Registered: Nov 2012
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posted December 17, 2012 12:22 PM
love it, Faith! It is perfect the way it is,you dont need to change anything.:-D Thumbs up!IP: Logged |
taureau20
Newflake Posts: 1
From:
Registered: Dec 2012
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posted January 07, 2013 03:50 PM
Very nice poem, Faith! Keep writing  IP: Logged |
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