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posted January 07, 2013 04:13 PM            

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Fall

Flowers fall
In love.
It is a Fall
In love
That cries
Leaves
Of poems

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Fallen

It was the first wind
Of love

That fleeced
Our breath

Set us
Aflame

As leaves
Fallen
In Autumn

As humans
Fallen
In love

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posted January 07, 2013 11:04 PM            

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I love how succinct and touching your verse is, taureau20

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Check out my poetry! <3

https://www.facebook.com/KKaneskyPoet

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posted January 08, 2013 06:03 AM            

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ou <333 ^^

very touching, with a sort of profound minimalist aesthetic~ makes me want to read more! ahah!

<3 ~it's a joy reading such poetry

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posted January 08, 2013 07:57 AM            

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Lovely... and I'm savoring the idea of flowers being in love!

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posted January 08, 2013 08:59 AM            

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Thanks all

I will share some more very soon...when I feel like it

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From: Ireland
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posted January 10, 2013 09:26 AM            

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Love your style, great poems

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posted January 10, 2013 11:41 AM            

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Loving all the double entendres... Leafs me wondering what comes next!

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posted January 10, 2013 02:20 PM            

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Thank you, pippastrelle and mirage29!

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