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posted January 26, 2013 06:59 AM            

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An echo runs through the air,
a melody, unknown.
The light, with the forgotten glare,
Greets me, as its own.

Where the warm river, stays frozen
Where love shadows hate.
A world sung out of words chosen
Where Will supersedes Fate.

Sings for my return, a part of me,
a part of an infinite whole.
He was, is and ever shall be,
a mother to my flickering soul.

To rise above the eternal spin
To bring rhythm to the infernal din
To be one with my divine kin
To destroy the original sin

To see the light, to sing the sound,
To find the lost, to fling the found,
To bind the free, to free the bound,
To save the tree, to tame the hound.

This journey to home, I undertake,
to unite with my longing self.
So a request to you, I direly make,
listen to your mourning Elf.

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posted January 26, 2013 11:37 AM            

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Welcome Grace; this is beautiful.

Legit- brought a tear to my eyes.

Furthermore;

"now That?
That struck a chord."

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posted January 26, 2013 11:41 AM            

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posted January 26, 2013 11:57 AM            

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Dear, That would become your own flaw. Ive done nothing to you nor tried to be ignorant on any behalf. Thee above lit a fire in my heart I've started to believe was extinguished by the devious plot of evil people. "It Struck a Chord; in my heart." Is there a reason to which you are judging what I've said and claim ignorance on it?

"struck a chord" is a phrase someone once used on a thread i read. I borrowed it, he can have it back now- please, calm yourself. This isn't a place for making up stories and claiming ignorance on to what there is none. Keep spreading bad vibes for no reason, you will be the only one who pays for it when its over.

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posted January 26, 2013 12:55 PM            

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Thank you.. and guys.. I've been in many threads in many other sites.. fights and misunderstandings were usual.. but here, its different.. WE are different.. I dont think it should not be our nature to fight here... that's all

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posted January 26, 2013 12:57 PM            

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And ethereal... it makes me inner self to know that my poem moved u deeply.. its an honor to do so for me

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posted January 26, 2013 01:12 PM            

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Originally posted by ethereal29:
Dear, That would become your own flaw. Ive done nothing to you nor tried to be ignorant on any behalf. Thee above lit a fire in my heart I've started to believe was extinguished by the devious plot of evil people. "It Struck a Chord; in my heart." Is there a reason to which you are judging what I've said and claim ignorance on it?

"struck a chord" is a phrase someone once used on a thread i read. I borrowed it, he can have it back now- please, calm yourself. This isn't a place for making up stories and claiming ignorance on to what there is none. Keep spreading bad vibes for no reason, you will be the only one who pays for it when its over.

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posted January 26, 2013 01:44 PM            

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