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Topic: When things go wrong
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Icygrace Knowflake Posts: 48 From: Mumbai, Maharashtra, India Registered: Jan 2013
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posted January 29, 2013 01:58 PM
Are you sinking into the ocean of dread? Down to wreckage, the ship of ambition you led? Did the mighty winds break your sail? Are the Great powers looming, ready to impale? You try to remain steadfast, but are washed away From the land of your desire, and you begin to pray. But the Lord above remains as silent as the night Still not losing hope, you decide to fight. You swim through the water, towards that land In which your faith is buried, a faith very grand But Alas! They come, the clouds of dismay And a storm rages, catches you in the fray. Engulfed in a frenzy, you are tossed and beaten down You start to smother as you begin to drown. You feel helpless, and so you give up On the dreams of your past, on the victor’s cup. The storm knocks you out, and blows you off-hand You open your eyes, your mouth tastes sand. Get up, O Cap’ain, there’s a sight to behold You’ve stumbled upon, an island of gold. Diamonds, pearls and ancient treasures, Fruits and fuels of un-bound measures. This stunning place, has more than you wanted More than the land of your desire, your wish now granted. Had it not been for the storm, you’d not be here So when things go wrong, you need not fear. Bad things happen for good, I always say Be strong and resolute in life’s mysterious play. So when all seems over, remember one thing After the grey winter, comes colourful spring.IP: Logged |
Cancer/Scorpio729 Moderator Posts: 1788 From: 6,000 feet above sea level Registered: Feb 2010
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posted January 30, 2013 10:24 PM
Wow I love this!IP: Logged |
Icygrace Knowflake Posts: 48 From: Mumbai, Maharashtra, India Registered: Jan 2013
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posted January 30, 2013 11:48 PM
Thanx!!!
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Icygrace Knowflake Posts: 48 From: Mumbai, Maharashtra, India Registered: Jan 2013
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posted January 31, 2013 02:23 AM
Thanx!!!
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charmainec Moderator Posts: 5988 From: Venus next to Randall Registered: Apr 2009
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posted January 31, 2013 03:31 AM
I absolutely love this! Thank you. ------------------ quote: Remember, love can conquer the influences of the planets....It can even eliminate karma.
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pippastrelle Knowflake Posts: 159 From: Ireland Registered: Nov 2012
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posted January 31, 2013 08:11 AM
Amazing poem, great imagery and beautifully written. Love it! IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 497 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted January 31, 2013 03:54 PM
Icygrace... you speak as an oracle, a prophetess-- from the eye of 'the great mind' you see, feel, and speak ... this resonates in my bones... Wishing you Great Blessings Upon Blessing! I thank God for the gift. The Great Invocation (New Troubadours) [1:52] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iHUJQbGA9-c
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Icygrace Knowflake Posts: 48 From: Mumbai, Maharashtra, India Registered: Jan 2013
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posted February 01, 2013 07:32 AM
Mirage... I thank you very much for your really warm comments... I'm just a guy who writes down his feelings whenever they overflow. Your appreciation is greatly welcomed IP: Logged |
Icygrace Knowflake Posts: 48 From: Mumbai, Maharashtra, India Registered: Jan 2013
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posted February 01, 2013 07:32 AM
quote: Originally posted by pippastrelle: Amazing poem, great imagery and beautifully written. Love it!
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Randall Webmaster Posts: 25058 From: Saturn next to Charmainec Registered: Apr 2009
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posted February 02, 2013 09:29 AM
------------------ "Don't worry about the world coming to an end today. It's already tomorrow in Australia." Charles Schultz IP: Logged |
Icygrace Knowflake Posts: 48 From: Mumbai, Maharashtra, India Registered: Jan 2013
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posted February 02, 2013 09:32 AM
Thanx RandallIP: Logged |