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Swift Freeze
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posted March 08, 2013 08:16 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Swift Freeze     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Dream With Me

Can I tell you what I see?
With all the pretty clouds beneath me,
Like a field of ice and snow,
So peaceful far below.

And the wind it feels so free,
brushing up against me,
maybe one day i'll learn to fly
but until then i'll just gaze up at the sky.

Can I fall into the air,
With not a worry or a care,
no one else but me and you up there.

Can I fly beneath the sea,
think of all the things we'd see,
no one else but, you and me.

I'll think of all the things we've seen
I'll think of you right here with me,
and I'll close my pretty eyes and dream.

Can I tell you what I see?
a beautiful tropical fantasy
its like a private exploration
that fills me with elation

All the colours bursting through
all the life with vibrant hue
it's my private underwater scene,
but until then i'll just gaze out, so serene.

Can I fall into the air,
With not a worry or a care,
no one else but me and you, there.

Can I fly beneath the sea,
think of all the things we'd see,
no one else but, you and me.

I'll think of all the things we've seen
I'll think of you right here with me,
and I'll close my pretty eyes and dream.


To dream is to be free,
Is what someone wise once told me,
any fantasy you can weave,
all you have to do is close your eyes and believe.


Can I tell you what I feel,
What's fantasy and what's real,
and what's bursting in my heart,
so please come and take part,

We can hide away for a while,
just sit and laugh and smile,
we'll build a house up in a tree,
just come and take my hand, and dream with me.

Can we fall into the air,
With not a worry or a care,
no one else but me and you, there.

Can we fly beneath the sea,
think of all the things we'd see,
no one else but, you and me.

I'll think of all the things we've seen
I'll think of you right here with me,
and I'll close my pretty eyes and dream,
and I'll dream of you right here dreaming with me.


- Chris

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Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams.

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mirage29
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posted March 08, 2013 11:40 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Swift Freeze... Reading your poem/songs are a feast of imagery and sense ---soooobeautiful!!

You ask the question, "Can I?".... Yesss, let's do it!

Walking in the Air [3:31] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K1qms9N6gDs

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Randall
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posted March 09, 2013 02:52 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Very beautiful.

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charmainec
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posted March 13, 2013 02:19 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for charmainec     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Ok, I am officially a fan of yours.

Beautifully written!

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Randall
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posted March 14, 2013 10:34 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Fan number 2 here.

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charmainec
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posted March 14, 2013 11:29 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for charmainec     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
As long as I'm number one.

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Randall
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posted March 14, 2013 01:18 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Always.

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charmainec
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posted March 14, 2013 01:49 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for charmainec     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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Faith
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posted March 15, 2013 10:46 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Faith     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
SwiftFreeze, you are brilliant.

I wish we could hear this set to music.

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Swift Freeze
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posted March 17, 2013 01:09 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Swift Freeze     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thank you all, it means a lot.

I would have to write the music to it first, then decide to record it. It's safe to say I will never be singing it for anyone.

- Chris

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charmainec
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posted April 27, 2013 07:41 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for charmainec     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Definitely one I'll return to read again and again.

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Pearlty
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posted March 22, 2014 12:28 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

Beautiful!

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Pearlty
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posted March 22, 2014 12:29 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
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Randall
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posted March 27, 2014 02:12 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Loving the imagery.

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FromEast
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posted March 31, 2014 10:57 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for FromEast     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Very beautiful... If I can make suggestion: from "I'll think of all the things" onwards the rhythm sort of broke off and returned in parts. Rhythm is what gave this poem wings and lifted it up in the air, so the poem kept coming down when the rhythm broke. Hope that wasn't offending. Best.

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