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pippastrelle
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posted March 19, 2013 07:36 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for pippastrelle     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
By The Brook


On a dew kissed rock a man sat and listened
to the rhythmic murmur of the brook
its smooth meandering pathway
hypnotic caw of nesting rook
unbinding wearied spirit
Nature's hymn to breaking day.

A kaleidoscope of colours, a captured rainbow
in his palms, as the Sun reflected ephemerally;
a sentinel from the heavens, a catalytic seed to sow,
on an empty joyless bottle grasped so desperately.
A vessel of unfulfilled dreams, shipwrecked, marooned
forever to remain undiscovered, captive in a lost lagoon.

His life replayed in spiralling colours, vibrant reds, blues, and pinks
clutching his brow in anger,
from the past he could not shrink
lost days, lost friends, sacrificed for liquid vice
'Oh how did I fall so low', he cried,
'why did I not think twice'!

From the bank he raised his weary limbs
glimpsed his reflection in the silver sheened water
made a pact with God and man his life would drastically alter.
He raised the bottle overhead, smashed it violently on mossy stone
past fragmented into smithereens, in liberation he did scream
a demon had been banished, a life given second birth
slave to a liquid god no more, but master of his reclaimed dreams.


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Faith
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posted March 19, 2013 11:00 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Faith     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Gave me chills...

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Swift Freeze
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posted March 20, 2013 04:34 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Swift Freeze     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
It feels like this had a very strong personal feeling and emotion behind it. Thank you for sharing so eloquently.

- Chris

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Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams.

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pippastrelle
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posted March 20, 2013 07:45 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for pippastrelle     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thanks for the replies. Yes, Swiftfreeze, the poem is based somewhat on my personal experiences. I have a relative who has struggled with substance abuse for many years ; so that was the catalyst for the poem.

Glad you and Faith both enjoyed it

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mirage29
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posted March 26, 2013 01:25 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
The etheric and earthly struggle is hard ... Can we truly will back a life and its dream once it's been shattered? I wonder now if some dreams of Life were meant to remain 'nothing but a dream'...

Phil Collins - Another Day In Paradise [5:47] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U66rzHtW2qQ

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pippastrelle
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posted March 28, 2013 08:48 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for pippastrelle     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
You could very well be correct, Mirage, maybe dreams are intended to be just "dreams"; although I do feel dreams can give one inspiration in life , something to strive for and perhaps keep one in a positive mindset
Having a 12th house Neptune I'm a hopeless dreamer,not always beneficial as I tend to live in my dreams at times instead of living in the "real world".

Thanks for your comment, appreciated

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