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posted March 24, 2013 12:30 AM            

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Eyes shot at water
fishes carelessly swim
squeezed my guts
and then I faltered
my guts intact
chest starts to crack
patience is virture--
so they say
illusion is enemy
oblivious mind intertwined
blankly with the clear sky
a turn of fate
a chance of fake
plastic figure full
with false hope
belief is key
open the gates to the sea
fish for those lost eyes
that linger in the blue
I found left
right is sunken
deep in desire
--stop the search
Faith is watching

*I honestly don't know what this is (in a way) but I'm posting it just for entertainment and maybe make you ponder, maybe, if interested.

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posted March 24, 2013 06:57 PM            

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When reading this what comes to mind?

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posted March 25, 2013 05:07 AM            

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Is this directed at me?

- Chris

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Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams.

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posted March 25, 2013 02:29 PM            

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No!
Ahahaha that name just came to mind when I wrote this.

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posted March 25, 2013 05:09 PM            

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Leonard Cohen, "Anthem" [9:33] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_e39UmEnqY8

Ring the bells that still can ring
Forget your perfect offering
There is a crack, a crack in everything
That's how the light gets in.

--LEONARD COHEN http://www.famouspoetsandpoems.com/poets/leonard_cohen/poems/7054

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posted March 25, 2013 05:36 PM            

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Originally posted by mirage29:
There is a crack, a crack in everything
That's how the light gets in.

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Wow, you're perfect for sharing this.

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posted March 25, 2013 07:06 PM            

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What a funny-peculiar mood you're in, virgolotus! Your genius is percolating! h-no: Strange, in a really cool kind of way... Enjoying you!

The Doors - People Are Strange (Jim Morrison) [2:13] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GJY8jJkDoMY

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posted March 25, 2013 09:04 PM            

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I've been trying to be more open on the site, not just lurk.
Thank you, mir

And I love Jim! Ugh, stop having such perfect taste!

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posted March 26, 2013 03:50 AM            

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It makes me think of false hope.
Things we are taught to believe but it's all a lie. That we are the ones to decide what works for.
Just my opinion.

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posted March 26, 2013 05:48 PM            

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Originally posted by charmainec:
It makes me think of false hope.
Things we are taught to believe but it's all a lie. That we are the ones to decide what works for.
Just my opinion.

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This resonates with what was going through my mind while writing this.

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posted March 27, 2013 01:22 AM            

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Oops, the sentence was supposed to be "what works for us"

Good poem.

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