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Topic: "Restrict"
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Virgo-AriesArtist
Knowflake Posts: 889
From: MidWest :)
Registered: Jun 2009
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posted March 28, 2013 02:43 PM
  
Kill the compulsive thoughts,
Break the neurotic chain,
Let my brain not stray that way,
or force me to feel the pain
Tear down the primitive needs,
Slash the illusive dreams,
Show me why it's madness,
Temper my inner screams ------------------
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virgolotus
Moderator Posts: 1124
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Registered: Jan 2012
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posted March 29, 2013 12:41 AM
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Virgo-AriesArtist
Knowflake Posts: 889
From: MidWest :)
Registered: Jun 2009
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posted March 29, 2013 12:51 AM
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Originally posted by virgolotus:
LOVE
Thank you, virgolotus!!  ------------------
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mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 827
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted April 04, 2013 07:07 PM
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Virgo-AriesArtist
Knowflake Posts: 889
From: MidWest :)
Registered: Jun 2009
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posted April 04, 2013 07:14 PM
Thanks, mirage ------------------
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taureau20
Knowflake Posts: 57
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Registered: Dec 2012
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posted April 09, 2013 03:58 PM
Very clean poem... IP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist
Knowflake Posts: 889
From: MidWest :)
Registered: Jun 2009
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posted April 09, 2013 10:59 PM
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Originally posted by taureau20:
Very clean poem...
Interesting observation, taureau. What makes you say that?  IP: Logged |
taureau20
Knowflake Posts: 57
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Registered: Dec 2012
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posted April 10, 2013 01:54 AM
It is very clear on what it is trying to say - i think i meant to say "clear" - "clean" is an extension of that.... IP: Logged |
mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 827
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Registered: May 2012
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posted April 11, 2013 06:51 PM
*bump*IP: Logged |
virgolotus
Moderator Posts: 1124
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Registered: Jan 2012
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posted April 12, 2013 02:20 AM
Will show my love for this poem a 2nd time!IP: Logged |
mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 827
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Registered: May 2012
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posted April 12, 2013 02:35 PM
It says so much! I agree, virgolotus!IP: Logged |
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