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taureau20
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posted April 17, 2013 08:15 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for taureau20     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
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Randall
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posted April 20, 2013 10:45 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Why did you erase it?

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taureau20
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posted April 20, 2013 11:55 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for taureau20     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
here:


barbara

streisand is a mermaid
who wouldn't answer you if you were to go knocking
on her door

you who are aboard
the ship that sails past the eternal
blue waters of moving pictures

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mirage29
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posted May 02, 2013 03:22 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
You have a way of capturing nuance of meanings...!

Are you baiting me, taureau20.... hmmm?

Well, I'm so glad that you didn't leave it blank coz it would've 'rain on my parade.....'!!

(music) Barbra Streisand - Rain On My Parade (1975) [2:31] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JAVlk4F2qkw

THANKS!.........

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Randall
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posted May 31, 2013 01:09 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Loves it!

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taureau20
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posted May 31, 2013 01:58 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for taureau20     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
well, thank you. this is a very american poem you see, even though i am not an american by (8000) miles. but you ppl in north america would understand this poem well because you know of barbara steisand and the usage of the expression "moving picture" i believe is common there. whereas in my country - india - it is not so. hence these sort of metaphors sort of remain geographically misplaced...

anyway the reason why i take down poems is because i give them to some online poetry magazines - again, based somewhere in the US - who take them only if they do not appear anywhere on the internet....

thank you!

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mirage29
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posted May 31, 2013 09:22 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
thanks for explaining that, taureau20

again, I admire your works! Congratulations on the progress you've made in publishing the work..... what an honor

and you've been 'a kind friend' to me...

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