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whitewitch111 Knowflake Posts: 594 From: Hillsboro, OR, USA Registered: Jan 2013
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posted August 11, 2013 06:55 PM
I don't know what to call this, but here it is;Sometimes I do believe that the sky will fall, Because my heart is my ending, Death is like neither heaven nor hell, It is simply a release, Of all happiness and pain, Eat my body away, maggots of the earth, Carry me away angels of the midnight, For now I am a corpse, So cold and so lifeless, And ghost so hauntingly flightless,
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Pearlty Knowflake Posts: 135 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted August 12, 2013 10:40 AM
Deep and complex I read it reversed from the last line to the first line as well, and its meanings are exquisite either way. I love the multi-layering in poems like this!
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mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 1740 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted August 14, 2013 02:24 AM
Pearlty! Thanks for pointing that out! How remarkable..... whitewitch111! So good to see you posting your work again! This poem is cool, graphic. I like it. IP: Logged |
whitewitch111 Knowflake Posts: 594 From: Hillsboro, OR, USA Registered: Jan 2013
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posted August 25, 2013 12:02 AM
Thank you so much pearlty and mirage! IP: Logged | |