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posted August 17, 2013 05:54 AM            

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"Dying Beats Ease"

Sugar, sugar, sugar,
Granules seep from my eyes,
And trail for miles;
My arms sweep in a wide arc
As I slowly embrace sky going by.
If I open my mouth,
I loathe to lose the glue coating my insides,
Glazing the pinks and browns I'm so fond of.
Dreaming night back from cliff's edge,
Sewing no hope from window's ledge,
And if this ache refuses to abate,
I have no choice.
Drawing in the soothing sounds of your heart within mine,
Sinking slowly within the sands of time,
The rhythmic pounding of plates' erosion,
No eruption except for the love of nothing
Bleeding from a deadened oasis of song.

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posted August 18, 2013 04:26 AM            

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Wow, I love it, MetalAphrodite!
... especially the last five lines. Deep work.

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posted August 19, 2013 05:13 PM            

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Beautifully descriptive thought and imagery on this...

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posted August 30, 2013 01:46 PM            

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Thank you for the lovely encouragement :3.

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