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MetalAphrodite
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posted September 04, 2013 03:49 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for MetalAphrodite     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
There is a part of me that aches for you
I am a star borne of frustration and fear
And in anxiety, I longed to hold you dear
Namesakes and earthquakes,
I found you between aggravating plates
Your lips full and inviting as they pursed
Puckering sweet, I felt incomplete as the
Day dawned from another sleepless night
Dreamless wondering fast beyond twilight
Who are you to laugh as if you knew?
Who am I to cry with camels in needle's eye?
My love, you are more than my heart
I crafted this body so you could embrace me
I recognized you through the twinkling of eyes
That long held forgotten love songs glittering
Across the milky galaxy's simpering fingertips

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Randall
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posted September 05, 2013 12:04 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Passionate!

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Pearlty
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From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012

posted September 05, 2013 11:53 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

Beautiful,
especially your last few lines..wow!

"My love, you are more than my heart
I crafted this body so you could embrace me
I recognized you through the twinkling of eyes
That long held forgotten love songs glittering
Across the milky galaxy's simpering fingertips"

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Swift Freeze
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Registered: Nov 2009

posted September 06, 2013 07:42 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Swift Freeze     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
It's absolutely beautiful.

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Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams.

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MetalAphrodite
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posted September 22, 2013 11:22 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for MetalAphrodite     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thanks for the wonderful comments ^^. I really appreciate them! It was a spur of the moment poem for my bf that I haven't shown him. Maybe I should o__o;;!

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mirage29
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Registered: May 2012

posted September 23, 2013 03:43 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Powerful and Beautiful, MetalAphrodite!

I hope your bf will 'hear' and appreciate your gifts!

Your reference to the "camels" in the "needle's eye" makes me think back to this song...

(music) I Who Have Nothing (Candice Glover) [3:19] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VpgWD9SOsxo

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