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MetalAphrodite Moderator Posts: 1448 From: Registered: Jul 2012
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posted September 04, 2013 03:49 AM
There is a part of me that aches for you I am a star borne of frustration and fear And in anxiety, I longed to hold you dear Namesakes and earthquakes, I found you between aggravating plates Your lips full and inviting as they pursed Puckering sweet, I felt incomplete as the Day dawned from another sleepless night Dreamless wondering fast beyond twilight Who are you to laugh as if you knew? Who am I to cry with camels in needle's eye? My love, you are more than my heart I crafted this body so you could embrace me I recognized you through the twinkling of eyes That long held forgotten love songs glittering Across the milky galaxy's simpering fingertipsIP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 32643 From: Saturn next to Charmainec Registered: Apr 2009
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posted September 05, 2013 12:04 PM
Passionate!IP: Logged |
Pearlty Knowflake Posts: 167 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted September 05, 2013 11:53 PM
Beautiful, especially your last few lines..wow!"My love, you are more than my heart I crafted this body so you could embrace me I recognized you through the twinkling of eyes That long held forgotten love songs glittering Across the milky galaxy's simpering fingertips" IP: Logged |
Swift Freeze Knowflake Posts: 387 From: One World Registered: Nov 2009
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posted September 06, 2013 07:42 AM
It's absolutely beautiful.------------------ Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams. IP: Logged |
MetalAphrodite Moderator Posts: 1448 From: Registered: Jul 2012
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posted September 22, 2013 11:22 AM
Thanks for the wonderful comments ^^. I really appreciate them! It was a spur of the moment poem for my bf that I haven't shown him. Maybe I should o__o;;!IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 1823 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted September 23, 2013 03:43 AM
Powerful and Beautiful, MetalAphrodite!I hope your bf will 'hear' and appreciate your gifts! Your reference to the "camels" in the "needle's eye" makes me think back to this song... (music) I Who Have Nothing (Candice Glover) [3:19] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VpgWD9SOsxo IP: Logged |