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Topic: Fruitopia
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Pearlty
Knowflake Posts: 177
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012
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posted September 23, 2013 09:32 AM
  
Affectionately encircled
without form
yet heat passes through
leaving behind warmthLike ripening fruit
spoiling underneath
the generous sun The more sunlight
reflected,
the sweeter and softer
the fruit
often becomes. IP: Logged |
Swift Freeze
Knowflake Posts: 400
From: One World
Registered: Nov 2009
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posted September 23, 2013 03:43 PM
Are you writing about someone?It's a beautiful sentiment either way. - Chris IP: Logged |
Pearlty
Knowflake Posts: 177
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012
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posted September 23, 2013 04:58 PM
I suppose I'm writing about myself. In the past it was kind of foreign for me to allow myself to feel spoiled from time to time, which of course we all need, alas is my metaphorical inference about fruit in the above poem.Something like that 
and thank you. IP: Logged |
mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 1841
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted September 23, 2013 09:18 PM
Pearlty, your words deliciously 'spoil me rotten' once again!  'Virtual' treat for the Senses! ~ The warmth from "Your Sun" just seems to have a way to penetrate and wrap those words with a lingering and easy-type of Comfortable Love... Nice job, as always!... 'I  Quality' IP: Logged |
Pearlty
Knowflake Posts: 177
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012
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posted September 25, 2013 09:02 AM
Thank you for your kind words and compliments Mirage. IP: Logged |
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