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FromEast
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posted April 02, 2014 03:52 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for FromEast     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
kisses will be erased with salt,
eyes washed off
and new ones grown

scratch your names on the walls of old, forgotten forts,
on the side of an abandoned, broken boat by the shore,
on the back of a rock

in the winter when the sacred fire
burns the memories off
your limbs, this eternal earth,

like a little girl’s doll
with keen ears,
will keep your names

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Ellynlvx
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posted April 02, 2014 10:01 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ellynlvx     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Well, Nothing Green can Stay, but some Memories are Pure Gold.

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Ellynlvx
Knowflake

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posted April 02, 2014 10:07 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ellynlvx     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Uh, or Vice Versa

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mirage29
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posted April 02, 2014 11:31 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
FromEast... I have read your poem over and over again... wonderful

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FromEast
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posted April 03, 2014 06:11 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for FromEast     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
hmm... just a hint - winter is often symbolic of death in poetry

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Pearlty
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posted April 03, 2014 10:59 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

I feel staunch metamorphosis within the clues, imprints, and symbolic trails left open to follow- found within this poem. I love pieces like this which stimulate thinking...

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mirage29
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posted April 03, 2014 05:38 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Winter is death, but Death has beauty in its breakdown.... Not always apparent from the surface of things.

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Ellynlvx
Knowflake

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posted April 03, 2014 07:38 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ellynlvx     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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FromEast
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posted April 03, 2014 11:57 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for FromEast     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thanks all

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Randall
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posted April 04, 2014 02:39 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Good stuff!

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FromEast
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posted April 05, 2014 04:11 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for FromEast     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thanks Randall

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