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Topic: eternity
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FromEast Newflake Posts: 10 From: Registered: Mar 2014
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posted April 02, 2014 03:52 PM
kisses will be erased with salt, eyes washed off and new ones grown scratch your names on the walls of old, forgotten forts, on the side of an abandoned, broken boat by the shore, on the back of a rock in the winter when the sacred fire burns the memories off your limbs, this eternal earth, like a little girl’s doll with keen ears, will keep your names IP: Logged |
Ellynlvx Knowflake Posts: 6637 From: Mountain Gate Registered: Aug 2013
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posted April 02, 2014 10:01 PM
Well, Nothing Green can Stay, but some Memories are Pure Gold. IP: Logged |
Ellynlvx Knowflake Posts: 6637 From: Mountain Gate Registered: Aug 2013
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posted April 02, 2014 10:07 PM
Uh, or Vice VersaIP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 2528 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted April 02, 2014 11:31 PM
FromEast... I have read your poem over and over again... wonderful IP: Logged |
FromEast Newflake Posts: 10 From: Registered: Mar 2014
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posted April 03, 2014 06:11 AM
hmm... just a hint - winter is often symbolic of death in poetry IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 465 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted April 03, 2014 10:59 AM
I feel staunch metamorphosis within the clues, imprints, and symbolic trails left open to follow- found within this poem. I love pieces like this which stimulate thinking... IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 2528 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted April 03, 2014 05:38 PM
Winter is death, but Death has beauty in its breakdown.... Not always apparent from the surface of things.IP: Logged |
Ellynlvx Knowflake Posts: 6637 From: Mountain Gate Registered: Aug 2013
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posted April 03, 2014 07:38 PM
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FromEast Newflake Posts: 10 From: Registered: Mar 2014
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posted April 03, 2014 11:57 PM
Thanks all IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 38997 From: Saturn next to Charmainec Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 04, 2014 02:39 PM
Good stuff!IP: Logged |
FromEast Newflake Posts: 10 From: Registered: Mar 2014
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posted April 05, 2014 04:11 AM
Thanks Randall IP: Logged |