Posts: 2131
From: Zanguin :3
Registered: Jul 2012

posted May 01, 2014 04:16 AM            

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"When It Rains"

Daddy's in jail and
Momma's in hell
Daddy's in jail and
Momma's in hell
Because
When it rains it pours
In pores
The gore of sores crystallize
Thick goop to scoop
In the bared hollow of a spoon
Can you bring me the moon?
Is it too soon to loom
Over the monsoons of June
Crumbled into fine mists
Trembling lips kiss
Miss insists yet says nothing
Because
When it rains it pores
Bores the ****** who want more
Than the tallied scores in fives
On a lipstick case
Notches on a leather casket of a belt
Captured by the embrace of a frown
Fallen upside down
Around town
They know my name
They know the game
Yet
It's always the same
The blame is to never refrain
Despite how many I detain
The waxing crescendo begins to wane
It's always the same
When it rains it pours
Daddy's in hell and
Momma's in jail
Daddy can spell and
Momma can't tell
Momma's in jail and
They say oh well
When it rains it pours
When it rains it pores
Do you remember what it's like
When it rains?

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From: the Point of Light within the Mind of God
Registered: Aug 2013

posted May 01, 2014 10:29 AM            

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Love,

Ellyn

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From: Saturn next to Charmainec
Registered: Apr 2009

posted May 03, 2014 01:22 PM            

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From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012

posted May 04, 2014 06:43 PM            

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I see this as a most perfect song- not poppie, upbeat, or status quo.. just very real with depth and meaning left to decipher. It's no doubt poetic too- but I heard music.

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From: us
Registered: May 2012

posted May 06, 2014 03:34 PM            

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Originally posted by Pearlty:

*thumbsup* I see this as a most perfect song- not poppie, upbeat, or status quo.. just very real with depth and meaning left to decipher. It's no doubt poetic too- but I heard music.

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Metal Aphrodite... Wishing you a sea of secure platforms filled with beautiful umbrellas that touch tip to tip... oceans of healing colors and inspiring peace. I wish you comfort in the sheltering hues, and deepest Healing in safest shelter....

Love you, miss you. May the mystical river wash your breathing pores clean, and preserve the core and deepest meanings of what it means to be the truly-You.

You Are Holy, and You Are Beautiful...

With tender gentle Love and Caring,

Sometimes you gotta just take the rain... and find its meaning. Then go take care of You when you've had enough... {{hug}}
(music) When it Rains (Eli Young Band, Vevo) [3:33] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qMF4B3wDO_E

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From: One World
Registered: Nov 2009

posted May 08, 2014 06:08 PM            

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When it rains, it pours. =) No Truer words said.

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Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams.

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From: Arvada,co USA
Registered: Dec 2013

posted May 24, 2014 08:53 AM            

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I know the rain well...nice piece

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