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Topic: Ready to bust out some poetry!
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whitewitch111 Moderator Posts: 1977 From: Hillsboro, OR, USA Registered: Jan 2013
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posted May 26, 2014 12:47 PM
Ok, I know I haven't been on here for a long time, but...I'm going to post some now. Hope you all enjoy Ladies and Gents! Here's my first one. I wrote this one to Castles made of Sand by Jimi Hendrix
To Brian Fly child to the ships in the sky, Fly oh fly hushabye, Baby, baby why you crying? Baby, baby, why you sighing? What't the point my darling? Don't you know you're my starling? 'Cause you're going to shine up there some day, With the rest of those so great and gay, Play me a song my baby, Play it just for me, You hold magic in that bass guitar, As if the universe be near not far, And all your songs for me, My dear lovely, You are the rainbow through the clouds, That wane when you're around, Just keep playing my honey, You'll make it big with lots of money, And all y0ur songs for me, As all my words for thee
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Pearlty Moderator Posts: 658 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted May 27, 2014 09:24 AM
I love your title you've chosen! Every now and then it's a must to bust out some poetry. Nicely written poem. IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 42518 From: Saturn next to Charmainec Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 11, 2014 12:35 PM
Good stuff!IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 2753 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted July 12, 2014 02:37 AM
whitewitch111 ~~ that was awesome! IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 42518 From: Saturn next to Charmainec Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 13, 2014 01:31 PM
You busted it out.IP: Logged | |