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Ayelet
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posted June 10, 2014 04:18 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Snow goes without saying
Snapping at your tongue with a swiftness so sudden
And I remember
What a display of coldness I have witnessed
in your sweet yet foreign disarray of manners
Bordering on madness
I can still feel your pain, as acute as mine
You are living again, revolving in fear
Around my absence
And love is still as near
Yet love is still as near


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Pearlty
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posted June 11, 2014 08:13 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

Your poem delves toward raw feelings which speaks volumes..I liked the short form simplicity yet in meaning the emotional complexity..

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Ayelet
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posted June 11, 2014 09:56 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thank you for your reading

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Randall
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posted June 12, 2014 12:28 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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Randall
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posted June 13, 2014 12:31 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Love the imagery.

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Ayelet
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posted June 13, 2014 06:33 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thanks Randall!

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Randall
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posted June 14, 2014 06:57 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
You're welcome.

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Pearlty
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posted June 17, 2014 07:05 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Had to come back and read this over again, I love this. Reminds me of heartfelt Yeats poetry, yet modernly flared.

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Randall
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posted June 21, 2014 11:06 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Missing the cold air right about now!

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Randall
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posted June 22, 2014 02:11 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
High 90s here.

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Randall
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posted June 23, 2014 02:26 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Yes, modernly flared.

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mirage29
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posted July 08, 2014 10:01 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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posted August 01, 2014 12:18 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
More!

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mirage29
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posted August 03, 2014 06:53 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Such a passionate, strong, mature romantic sense about this poem, Ayelet... I can imagine it!

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Ayelet
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posted August 05, 2014 10:31 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thank you so much Mirage!

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