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Topic: That Aries Girl
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whitewitch111 Moderator Posts: 2267 From: Hillsboro, OR, USA Registered: Jan 2013
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posted August 05, 2014 10:41 PM
I wrote this to the soundtrack to the red violin....it has to do with my life presently... :'(That Aries Girl Sitting here, Banging my head against the wall, Just for you... Cast me into the asylum, Throw away the key, I am like all the other crazies, Why do you no longer love me? Why does she suit you? For, I am the mother of your seed, Even if it no longer lives, Is that why my dear? Because I could not birth our child? Or is it that I am a filly and she a mare? Maybe I am too young, 19 I am, 33 you are, 28 she is, Is that it? Mayhap it is in my head, Mayhap I am insane, Then who is the queen of wands? Tell me that I plead! Is it her? That Aries girl? Then kill me now if be it so, Oh, you were my prince, My fairy tale prince, But you are just like all the toads, Indeed did you ever love me? Or did you love the idea of me? For I know now that Aries girl is your soul, And always will be, For I can be your heart, But your soul is her place, Oh, to that Aries girl, Know what a fool you be, To love this Capricorn man, And from this, A Libra walks alone
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Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 341 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted August 05, 2014 11:16 PM
This is a sad and realistic poem, one feels it is coming from life. I wish you'll advance soon toward a happier time, when a prince is truely a prince, even if bewitched, and not a toad in disguise. I know such things are hard to forget or to put aside. But one must, somehow, survive life with life. So i wish you love and happiness and continuation of writing and whatever you do to make you happy! IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 341 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted August 05, 2014 11:35 PM
I am sorry i wrote more to you than about the poem. This is what i felt like writing. Does it happen to you too, that when you write something that stems from a specific experience, you are already at some distance from it? IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 43314 From: Saturn next to Charmainec Registered: Apr 2009
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posted August 07, 2014 01:21 PM
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Pearlty Moderator Posts: 672 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted August 08, 2014 09:14 AM
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