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Brobian
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From: Brewster , Ohio USA
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posted August 08, 2014 11:20 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Brobian     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I was walking down the street.
Whistling a soft beat.
Life was treating me so good.

I moved around the corner.
Nothing on my shoulders.
Everything was as it should.

I was walking down the block.
Staring at the sidewalk.
Kicked a small piece of wood.

Then you passed right by me.
Smiled so that I’d see.
I just stopped where I stood.

My thoughts started running wild.
I felt like a small child.
I knew right away that I would.

I’d give her a love that’s pure.
And this I know for sure.
A love that no other could.

Cause I just wanna love her.
Spend my whole life with her.
Stay with her until the end.

I don’t want no other.
Not even gonna bother.
In my eyes she’s a perfect ten.

Please lord she must see.
She’s all that I need.
My love will never rend.

I will stand beside her always.
Hurt her in no ways.
Show her the love she deserves.

Please god she must know.
Just how deep my love goes.
I promise it will never swerve.

It will always be pure.
But only for her.
Never will you see it curve.

Now as I stare upon you.
Whatever shall I do.
I can’t find no words to say.

My mind is like a gutter.
It’s filled with so much clutter.
I just don’t know what to say.

My eyes have yet to see.
A woman quite like thee.
Up until this crazy day.

Your smile shines upon me.
It’s all that I see.
I fell in love right away.

With my mind all abuzz.
And filled with so much fuzz.
I’m finally able to say.

I just wanna love you.
Spend my whole life with you.
Stay with you until the end.

I don’t need another.
Not gonna bother.
To me your a perfect ten.

Please baby you must see.
You’re all that I need.
My love, it will never end.

I shall stand beside you always.
Hurt you in no ways.
Give you the love you deserve.

Please honey you must know.
Just how deep my love goes.
I promise it will never swerve.

It will always be true.
But only for you.
Never will you see it curve.

My heart is on fire.
Its need for you is dire.
Please baby you must see.

My love will be true.
Always and ever for you.
Your love is all I need.

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Sun in Gemini - Moon in Pisces - Ascendant Scorpio

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Ayelet
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posted August 09, 2014 12:59 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Indeed, when one meets one's true love, everything is as it should be... just before they meet. Or so it seems to me. I don't know if there are certain rules to it... just a feeling that it's right. I loved the way you commit in the poem, the readiness for love.

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Brobian
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From: Brewster , Ohio USA
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posted August 09, 2014 01:39 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Brobian     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
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Originally posted by Ayelet:
Indeed, when one meets one's true love, everything is as it should be... just before they meet. Or so it seems to me. I don't know if there are certain rules to it... just a feeling that it's right. I loved the way you commit in the poem, the readiness for love.

It's not so much a readiness for love but rather it's a readiness for love with the right one. That one which will last a lifetime.

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Ayelet
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posted August 09, 2014 02:35 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
This is what i meant

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Brobian
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From: Brewster , Ohio USA
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posted August 09, 2014 02:41 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Brobian     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
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Originally posted by Ayelet:
This is what i meant

Oh, my deepest apologies then. I am very ready for that. It's actually really simple. I'll give my attention, loyalty, compassion, passion, affection, and my entire heart to her. I just ask that she give me it all back in return.

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Pearlty
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posted August 09, 2014 10:42 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Very pretty love poem.

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Brobian
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posted August 09, 2014 11:02 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Brobian     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
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Originally posted by Pearlty:
Very pretty love poem.

Thank you very much, Miss. Pearlty.

Actually, this one is a song, which I have created my own melody and beat for. I could sing it to you, if you like! lol

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Sun in Gemini - Moon in Pisces - Ascendant Scorpio

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Pearlty
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posted August 09, 2014 11:48 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

Oh my not only poetry, but you sing and song write too? Must be multi-talented, that's impressive.

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