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posted August 13, 2014 12:04 PM            

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Some of the prettiest poems
have been for you

You wake me from sleep
and teach me to remember life
when I'm far away

Often secluded
passively rhythmic
within state of mind

Here a hardened shell
softens while the heart
resides somewhere else

Pieces feel molten together
and complete
when you're here with me
existing in self.

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posted August 14, 2014 10:32 AM            

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Loves it!

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posted August 15, 2014 05:03 PM            

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Thanks

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posted August 16, 2014 01:54 PM            

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It's succinctly deep.

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posted August 17, 2014 01:12 PM            

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"succinctly" haven't heard that word in awhile. and thanks again.

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posted August 18, 2014 02:44 PM            

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Things that are succinct rarely are of any depth.

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