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Pearlty
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posted September 13, 2014 09:30 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

Still in a foggy dream state
wandering layer within layer
my thoughts rest upon you

I check my reflection
something's different?
I see something new

a playfulness imbued
the intensity softened
by this rose colored mood.


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yellowelevator
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From: Michigan, Neptune, and sometimes Pluto
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posted September 15, 2014 08:46 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for yellowelevator     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
That is really beautiful! There is a sweet simplicity about it. And I really love the last stanza and how the first and second line rhyme perfectly.

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Randall
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posted September 16, 2014 01:59 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Was the rhyming accidental?

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Pearlty
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posted September 16, 2014 04:02 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

Why thank you Yellowelevator.

Randall nope it wasn't accidental- just some word play corresponding with my mood.

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