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posted September 18, 2014 10:04 PM            

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The Best Response

Why is it that I always
fail to understand?
Is it the weather that
keeps on jumping
in my head?
Like a small snow ball
with nothing else to do
on a wet field
sometimes
the best response
lies
within
So I sip in my drink
as cool as a mellow marsh
from a distance

(I've tried arranging the rows differently, but it didn't come out)

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posted September 19, 2014 09:24 AM            

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Very nice "mellow marsh" I love that -fits perfectly.

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posted September 20, 2014 09:02 AM            

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Thank you Pearlty

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posted September 21, 2014 02:48 PM            

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Me, too!

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posted September 21, 2014 03:12 PM            

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Thanks Randall!

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posted September 22, 2014 02:10 PM            

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The rows are arranged perfectly.

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posted September 22, 2014 02:43 PM            

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The Best Response is fertile, indeed! Your inner view is amazingly still... cool, and refreshing!

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posted September 23, 2014 09:36 AM            

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Originally posted by Randall:
The rows are arranged perfectly.

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Thanks. I tried to move the words around a little bit, though...

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posted September 23, 2014 09:37 AM            

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Thank you Mirage!

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