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posted October 27, 2014 12:39 PM            

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Is night the winter of day?
Is it so cold that we must break away?

Is winter my sorrow?
Spring - my delight?
Why is it that lately
I can't sleep at night?

Countless thoughts happen,
countless thoughts pass,
and just before dawn
I pass out.
Does spring have a reason,
a season to me,
or does it just come
inevitably?

Perhaps we are linked,
the weather and I,
to reach a far away goal
and nature defy.

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posted October 27, 2014 04:29 PM            

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posted October 28, 2014 11:41 AM            

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Love the rhyme scheme.

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posted October 29, 2014 12:19 PM            

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Thanks again

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posted November 05, 2014 09:04 AM            

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Like this one a lot Ayelet

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posted November 05, 2014 04:56 PM            

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Thank you Pearlty

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posted November 06, 2014 10:02 PM            

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Great! I really liked the ending, especially.

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posted November 07, 2014 10:39 AM            

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Thanks Iced8Ace!

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posted November 10, 2014 06:24 PM            

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posted November 18, 2014 09:17 AM            

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Ayelet you've a fan heart,so small but so full of passion

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posted November 19, 2014 04:41 PM            

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My heart is as small as my fist
which is rather small...

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posted November 20, 2014 09:29 AM            

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