posted November 05, 2014 06:29 PM            

Moment

A pre-emptive chance
In the midst of a feeling
To leap and grasp

All my decision

An effort to right in vain
Cowardice blankets the blame
Derision in my lungs

Rips at passions flames

Doubt can consume
I can't control a moment
Endlessly drawing into you

Sleepless, thoughtless devotion

A constant wave is one motion
Unabashed by time
Good-byes are stagnant

posted November 05, 2014 06:51 PM            

Clarity

Words lack tongue ---
Suited to whispers in the willow
The sun is without beams
When I do not know you

Sighs kindle me blue
Time reveals a tepid erosion
Of the truth, balanced on the seams
Kept from me and wrung

On the telephone you breathed me
A dull lull of heartbroken apathy
And never had you spoken words so fine
When you uttered a heartfelt good-bye

Short quickie

A matchbox
ticks off
the brighter aspirations
I put off

Another quickie

Lost

Where's the moment?
How did I lose the capture of thine eyes?
Was it by tether nor this meek design
That I slipped to clench his ear
In desperation of my tiding fear
That you belonged on a surface far nearer
Than what I could hold dear?

Failed to rhyme you to amusement
The music was lovely but her glance - flits
Across the room, I turned her
Yet her focus remained singular
Noosed in my wrestle of morbid corruptions
A jangly hall devised to yield my destruction

I roamed in his iris to alleviate the danger
Found but that I, was the lost stranger

posted November 06, 2014 03:33 AM            

Make no claim to be good, just enjoy what you do, and that will be most evident in what you write and share.

The most important thing, is that you are satisfied with what you have created, it may be one of the toughest though. Song writers, poets, playwrights, script writers, all take a long time to create something they feel is 'finished'.

posted November 10, 2014 06:09 PM            

Your talent is amazing and very inspiring to me.

p.s. > I read your poem titled "An oldie" before seeing your above-works.